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Two girls swimming and facing their fears. 300 words
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My short story is about a merchant girl saving a bunny, and vice versa. word count 293
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It is a short story for the Daily Flash Fiction Contest
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A woman's thoughts after the death of her husband.
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My first writing. I Appreciate any reviews and critiques. Drama short story.


This is my first writing I have ever submitted anywhere. Please review and critique it for me. I appreciate all help. Thank you.
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Will read it when I get a chance.

Thank you for having the courage to post it here on WDC. The first step of a new journey is always the hardest to take.
Ok, I've read it. Wow. You express yourself well, and the story is good. It deserves a better review than "Great read!" or whatever, so I'm going to take my time with it... when I can actually spend the time to give it proper credit.

I'll see if I can get some other people to take a look at it. Elle - on hiatus Author Icon and friends, this means you. I'm not sure who might best like to read something like this.
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