In my critique of your ladybug Haiku, I suggested a dash, but on second thought realize that it would be better following "landed" as that's where the reader should pause then read on.
I have a synopsis of Haiku in my portfolio -"Adventures in Haiku'
Thank you for this gracious advice, foxtale!
I tend not to use additional punctuation in favor of creating original lines without the need for extra characters.
I see now how unnecessary a skill that is ;)
I will be making an updated version of my Haiku portfolio and plan to remember to add a 'dash' after "landing"
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I tend not to use additional punctuation in favor of creating original lines without the need for extra characters.
I see now how unnecessary a skill that is ;)
I will be making an updated version of my Haiku portfolio and plan to remember to add a 'dash' after "landing"
Best,
Chris