| Could you please look at "Colors of Chiang Mai (OrangeSeaAtSunset)" [13+]. I'll be adding and revising this week. I need to know whether my characters are vivid and believable. I've lived in Isaan (Udon Thani) so I'll incorporate what I've learned about the roles of family and friends. I add footnotes but popnotes/dropnotes may be better. It follows "The waves below, the stars above" [13+] where "something has been lost" (it needs fleshing out) with "something lost has been found". There could be connecting stories in between but... that's for another day. This needs to stand on its own. As a multi-lingual traveler who has lived outside of my original comfort zone its hard to write for readers at WDC, many who are mono-lingual and mono-cultural. Fortunately, WDC is not my ultimate audience. |