Made many changes so the story flows with more ease. I hope so anyway! Also focused on less words. It's still a long short story though. Review for a review I've just edited an item in my portfolio:
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When one passes, one is replaced and barren smiles don't sooth the soul, I've added a new item to my portfolio:
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kissed my heart with a melody... I've added a new item to my portfolio:
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lost in the byways & highways of impossible dreams breathless like smoke or moonbeams rising when the sun sets I've just edited an item in my portfolio:
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Is a story ever done? After some time away, and after proofreading...I made some changes. Hope you like it! |
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