I've just edited an item in my portfolio:
Hi. There was a minor update regarding the descriptions of Jak's characters upon his request. I took longer to do it because I was caught in some stuff but I finally got it done, I'm also resuming writing on this story. |
Well I kept my promise, Naruto redeeming chapter delivered. Although I'll have to make a second part as I was running out of charaters. I've noticed that the limit is at about 9,300 because of signs like , " # etc. Blake wasn't fighting at full power obviously but he still got to see what Naruto can do when he's about evenly matched. |
YESSSS. Love DBZA. Anyway I'll start on the Vegeta fight....or not..Stay tuned to see what the chapter entails. |
Cool. I know I'll probably have a good laugh along a nice reading |
jak would be like nappa. |
I apologize again for the delays, I have been sort of sick (I rarely get sick and even if i do I fight it back lol) and i wasn't really able to do much. I'll try to get today or tomorrow, Friday, at least a chapter or half a chapter done for the X series, and who knows, once i get it maybe i can do more. I'll be doing this later today |
Well. I got about 50 - 60% of next chapter. I'll get some sleep and continue it later. It feels nice to be back at this XD |
there might be a chance that 18 gets her brother back. vegeta still gets his ass handed to him after ryan gets pissed off. he is shocked to see the legend that will the window ryan needs before going after cell. ivan and broly are the fakes while ryan is pure legendary saiyan. How is his tail going to effect his forms? what about the god fight with billis and the super saiyan god form? |
Bills would have to be the very final villain. The tail basically makes the super saiyan forms stronger and more efficient from what I can infer from Goku in GT. Not so much as fakes but Broly and Ivan just would happen to be flawed as they also have mental problems (think of saiyan schizophrenia or something of the sorts, derived from mental and physical trauma from their early lives), which hinders their true potential. |
there has to be a point where that they can control the forms without the tail. ryan and goku double them him in god mode, but ryan lasts longer in it. 18 might be with child when that happens or a long lost relative helps out. that will be up in the air. she starts exploring her growth power by using cell as the dummy. there has to be a way that she can hear ryan. |
Well, at least I am doing revisions of chapters about the greater backstory, and I realized that the final ideas i had as of now didn't fully match the earlier drafts I wrote. This is the first edited chapter I did today: http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1632757-Shrunk-with-your-Girlfriend... Due to character limit here I can't post the old chapter but if anyone wants to check it I'll send it via e-mail |
Well, as a sort of writing warmup, Ill add some chapters to the Dragon Ball and Bleach stories, in Friendly Thinker's A special story interactive. Coming soon... lol |
Well now that Friendly Thinker gave a very nice finisher for the dream arc, I reveal that it was not Blaze's doing (If it had been Blaze it would have been the true Blaze going into the dream). Stay tuned for more... and lol... inside joke win... |
Added a chapter. Sorry for the delay again but I was kinda sick (I'm okay by now anyway). It was again a little short because I couldn't get any more ideas for now. Well, this is nearing the climax for this dream-filler-mini arc, so, I think Luigi P. (if he wants) can do the following chapter (having the girls recover from KO is ok but up to him) And well, then Friendly Thinker would add the finishing chapter for this. |
Chapter FINALLY done. Sorry I took so long, but believe me, it's more difficult (at least for me) to complete a half made chapter after several weeks than making a new one from scratch. Anyway, I leave it for Friendly Thinker to continue (and end?) so we can get back to the actual story... |