We have similar writing styles. I enjoy and relate to this poem. The flow of the piece is strong, it's theme stays consistent and reminds me a little of the Nickelback song about the shooting of Dimebag Darryl. (Side of a bullet) The lines convey to me a sense that you are writing from personal experience, and that produces the best writing. Unfortunately, in today's society, people are just fine with a song that sounds slapped together in five minutes and with no real story to tell. We need more well thought out and arranged works like yours..... So great job and keep writing!
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