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#4603278

Review of Christmas 2019

Review by anna banana

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

A bit easy but enjoyable. Thank you.

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Review of Dear Madalyn

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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)

I would like to give you a bunch of things to think about but I didn't find anything
that would be helpful. It was great how you conveyed what you wanted to say in a letter.
Thank you for sharing.

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Review of Momma's Little Man

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Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (4.0)

It was great and I was laughing through most of it. I would have to reread it again just to do the
grammatical things but I didn't even notice them. Good job and great short story! Big smile here!

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#4560567

Review of A remote

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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Absolutely fantastic poem! I'm not a poem person but this went straight to my heart.
I smiled through the whole read. Well done!!! Anna Banana

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Review of A Force of One

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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

I am not great at reviewing poems but this I will comment on.
I absolutely loved it! Thank you for this wonderful piece of work.
Action Anna Banana

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Review of We Belong

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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (3.0)

Very nicely done. I felt it all...seems like couples really do that, we do! The only thing I saw was tyres, should be: tires. Other than that, I liked it.

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#4451537

Review of Dollars & Roses - Chapter 1

Review by anna banana

Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (4.0)

I believe that this will be quite a story if you keep going the way you have written so far. Adelaide is going to be a most interesting character (at least that is what I am hoping). Good luck to you and keep going. Love to see how it turns out! Big Smile here. Anna Banana

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Review of Xen's Chosen

Review by anna banana

Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (3.5)

Hi Elliot, thanks for sharing your story. What was before chapter 1? Just asking, I really had not noticed that it was chapter 1 until I read on and it didn't have anything to do with what was written prior to that. Another thing is that I didn't see much on what each person looked like actually. I find when I'm writing I want to go with what the character is saying and doing without really telling what they look like. A friend of mine asked me one time is the girl in red pretty? I had to go back and work into the story what each one of them looked like, either at the time of introducing them or slowly throughout the things they were doing. I know what Ferris looked like. Let me know what you think and if I missed anything I followed the different antics that were happening. I would like to follow your journey. All smiles here. Keep going!!