This was the only flaw and I find at least one just like it in any novel I read! I loved your story! So professional - it could be easily qualify for being published it's so polished.
I do wish that the two ladies had met up - but as it is written, it has a more sophisticated end than my wish for happy endings would have been. Love it! I will be looking for more stories from you.
They had (to) watch the time...Joe Trechant must never catch Amy talking to someone that he didn't approve of.
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