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#4655530

Review of Gravity

Review by alexmp

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Oh. My. Gosh. This poem was so deep. I love the way your rhymes flowed and changed perfectly with one another. I felt as if I was the person in the poem as you described the cosmic and intricate feelings that were involved. One thing is that poems like this sometimes have comas at the end of the lines. Did you forget those or was it a stylistic choice. Anyways this is quite possibly the best poem I've read on here. Thank you for the experience.

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#4655529

Review of Donald trump a clerihew

Review by alexmp

Rated: E

| (3.5)

I really like the imagery used with your last line in the poem. I feel like it's relatable and the rhymes you used went together nicely. Keep writing poems, I found this very interesting.

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#4655335

Review of An Excerpt from Competition for Queen

Review by alexmp

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Oh. My. Gosh. The start to this story is so captivating! I would love to read more of what is to happen. Your main character in this piece seems like a woman fit to be queen. She seems to hold a certain power, calmness, and the right kind of love for the prince. However I would like to know if she ever had doubt she would be chosen or if there were any other people interested in her before. I feel like that would make an awesome conflict. I apologise if you already thought of this. Anyway, this is the best piece I've read so far. Keep on writing!

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#4655334

Review of Time to Go

Review by alexmp

Rated: E

| (4.0)

I love the ominous dark feeling this poem gives off. The way you wrote the poem gave me slight goosebumps to read and really portrayed the right picture. It might just be me but one thing I would like to have an elaboration on is who's laughing in your last line.

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#4655333

Review of The Red Sunset

Review by alexmp

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Your poem is beautifully structured and I love the shape the words make. The rhymes flow with a certain gracefulness. Very relatable, keep writing!!

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#4655331

Review of Excerpt, The Boy Who Came That Summer

Review by alexmp

Rated: E

| (4.0)

I love the start of this story. As I read I became more and more drawn in. I can't wait to find out what was up with Kelsey's parents. It would be great to see more of Kelseys reactions to the trash talk to get a sense of just how it's throwing her off. That said, keep writing, I love your work!