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I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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Review of Footprints  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Footprints - we leave them in sand, snow, mud, wet or soft dirt. Barefoot, in shoes, boots, sandals, flip-flops, crocs, clogs, and more - we leave our marks. Some are skilled at tracking them, mapping out our path. However, none can match the route that we, ourselves, have taken during our life.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of The Shepard  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A shepherd out watching their sheep begins to daydream. He wonders about things, about his desires and more. Then, he decides to have some fun. However, when he comes to his senses, he soon learns an important lesson - always know where the sheep are, or you might lose them.

Thoughts and Characters
An interesting piece to read with an interesting character.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of If only I knew  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A young woman, entering Senior year of High School, reflects upon the memory of a childhood friend, who she hasn't seen in years. She also has to deal with the fact that a lot of young men want her, but she isn't into them. Then, one day, the Past and Present collide when the school gets a new student, whose name is the same as the young woman's childhood friend. What will happen between them?

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
Unless it's a way of showing how Karina isn't paying attention, Katelyn's speech is fill of errors. But, if it is a way of showing that, then no issues.

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Review of Longing  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
We all long for something as we look out past the stars. There is that part of us that wonders what happens when the Sun rises, causing them to just vanish. Granted, most of us know that the stars are still there, but the light of the Sun outshines them. However, there will always be that part that just looks up, and wonders.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of New Hunter  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A prince is sitting in a chair, interviewing a number of folks who are trying to get jobs at the palace. He soon meets an interesting prospect in the form of a hunter, who, on the one hand, seems to be skilled at hunting, but on the other, seems to be rather nervous. Makes one wonder about them. I hope to read more.

Characters
Characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Blood - it is part of how we live. It's part of how we die. We need blood to live. Without it, we die. As long as the blood flows, we live. When it stops, so do we. One of the biggest questions we ask is, what kind of blood do we have? Do we have the blood of a brave person, or that of a coward? Something to think on at times.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A man tries to work at a technology company. There's a number of delays, and a whole lot of trouble, like clients threatening to cut the funding. Then, several team members walk away from the project. Will they be able to solve their issues, and get the project out in time to salvage things? Read to find out.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Feral Mama Cat  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is worth a chuckle, or two. A feral mother cat, and her kittens, get caught by city workers. Somehow, she, and the kittens, manage to escape whatever location that they'd been in, and somehow managed to return to their home. Certainly worthy of an epic or two, I will say that.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Music is something that many can enjoy. Can't say that I'm a big fan of the piano - didn't stop me from making from making noise with those keys whenever I had the chance! *Laugh* Likewise, I'm no good with any instrument - I just make noise! However, I tend to listen to Country type things, or most anything with what I feel has a good beat to it. All kinds of music out there.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Mowing  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Mornings - you wake up to them, ready to start a new day. We go out, and find out what is new in the world. We listen, we watch, we learn. It's what we do, as we go about our day, learning about things. Each day has something new to take in. Each moment is something that can be treasured for the rest of our lives.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spell;ing and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestion
Might make more sense to title this piece "Morning" instead of "Mowing".

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Review of Forgotten Values.  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
What happens when memories we once held dear become tainted with darkness? Is it possible to salvage them, or are they best forgotten? That is a question we must ask ourselves, especially when trouble comes. But, even in darkness, there is a light, shining bright, which we must keep close to us.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Reflections.  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Puddles - pools of water that form in a small depression on the ground. They last only a few days at most. When one looks into them, they reflect an image, of you, and the things around you. What happens when a mud puddle fades away? Is the image somehow trapped inside of it? Who knows for sure. Sometimes you just have to enjoy them while they last.

Thoughts
An interesting poem to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
The light of a lightbulb. When on, we can see. When off, and it's dark, we can't. Sometimes a lightbulb dies, and we must change it. In this case, Trust is compared to Light, how it is beautiful when it is there, and how it is dark when it is gone. Just like a lightbulb, when Trust dies, a new one is needed.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of kids  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Living life, child-free. There are those who love having children. After all, they are the next generation. Then, there's those who care for them, but don't want any of their own, or haven't had the chance to do so. There's plenty of things that go on when it comes to children. For some, they can be very happy not having children.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of A place for Mama  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Ah, grandmas, and how they are important to us. They are the glue that keeps a family together, the reason folks will travel across hundreds of miles, for the holidays, and special events. We visit them whenever we can. But, when they are gone, some have no reason to return to the proverbial nest that they grew up in, and connections can be lost.

Thoughts
A very respectful piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of TCG Pokémon  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting piece to take a look at. You talk about the Pokemon trading card game. You seem to be talking about some league's rules - either one you run, or one you are part of - which states what kinds of cards are allowed. This can be very useful to know, for those who are curious about that league.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling and grammar.

Suggestions
Add this to the following Genres - Hobby/Craft, Activity, and Fantasy.

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Review of "Winter Light"  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This looks like the start of an interesting play. A young woman, reading on a bench at the park, meets up with a young man. The pair begin to talk, sharing mutual interests. This talk seems to last all, if not most of, the day. When they leave, it's clear that they want to meat again.

Characters
Characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
You might want to use Bold for the names and Italics for emotions and such.

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Review of The Mystic Woods  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this looks like the start of an interesting story. A young lady, who loves the fantasy genre, finds an old book, and finds herself teleported to a strange world. Will she find her way home? Just wait and see to find out what will happen to her. I hope to see more myself.

Characters
The characters seem promising.

Spelling and Grammar
Spelling and grammar looks alright.

Suggestions
Might want to include a ling to the main story, when it's posted.

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Review of To Love Herself  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Love - an essential need that, sometimes, can be hard to find. Trying to mold one's self to a set image, or idea, is not going to get one the love they need, especially when others might not show that they care, or don't care at all. The first thing one must do, is care for their self.

Characters
Characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Valentine's Hawk  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A woman looks out a window on Valentine's day, looking for a bird to give her a sign of what her future beholds, in terms of her love life, not wanting to be a maiden. She ends up seeing a hawk. What this means, she doesn't know. Then, she ends up saving the life of a plasterer from a terrible fate. There's plenty that happens as a result.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar, once I understood what I was reading.

Suggestion
Might help to put in a date - not everyone expects Shakespearean script in a story. *Laugh*

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Rated: E | (4.5)
A man stops at a gas station. Now, you might think that this is nothing new - go in, pre-pay for gas, and fill the gas tank. However, it seems that this is a little different, for the man has a devil riding shotgun on his shoulder, trying to tempt him with an item that is forbidden - Delicious Coca-Cola. Will he avoid this temptation, or will the Devil get their way? Read to find out.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Feral Cats  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
As I read this story, I have to chuckle - unless something has seriously gone wrong, there is no way that this story could happen in the USA for one simple reason - those three lions wouldn't last a week out in the wild if they did become Maneaters. After all, us Americans just love our guns.

Anyways, three lions seem to be terrorizing a small town, having killed apparently a number of residents. However, it seems that, somehow, these lions were somehow generically modified, and thus are rather unusual. It also seems that there might be more than just three lions out there.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestion
Give us a little more of a backstory about how the lions came about - secret military lab, crazed mad scientist that bred them, how they seem to shrug off bullets, and so on.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
A man serves ice cream to his son and son's friends. As he does so, he reflects upon his youth, and the things he once did. He reminisces about a favorite ice cream stand, what sort of ice cream he wanted that day, or would it be a slushie, about whom he'd chat with, and what all would happen. Nothing like childhood memories.

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
You have a number of areas where you have Calebs - this should be Caleb's. A few other spots have similar issues.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
A man spends some time with a woman. They share their likes and dislikes. They talk about the items that the man has, and some of the things he's into. After a while, they soon talk about other things. Soon enough, they head to his room, where things are merely left to the imagination of the reader, the woman simply being just another that the man has known.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling and grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
There are days and times where all feels dark and full of sorrow. Something bad happened, which we cannot forget. Our once favorite weather and places can even be tarnished by this darkness. Even talking to friends and doing favorite activities can feel like a chore. However, we must look to see what makes us happy, if we wish to get out of this mess, if we wish to smile again.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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