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I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
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Review of Harsh Hand  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Sometimes one lives in an area where the laws and rules are unreasonable. Sometimes there are ways to change them - some reasonably easy, and others are much harder. One question might be, where, followed by, who? The answers to these might cause the methods of change to differ, depending on the situation.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of The Map's Pact  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This looks like the start of an interesting story. A queen goes missing, and the kingdom's main river starts flowing backwards. Is this a coincidence, or are the two tied together? It will take a brave scribe to uncover the mystery, and save his kingdom, or all will be lost. What will happen to him on his quest?

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
There's a section where it's mentioned that the scribe took the job recently, only "Job" is written as "Jo".

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Mayonnaise - the secret to Time Travel? One man might find out the truth behind those words, when his neighbor comes over, and askes for this condiment. Is this neighbor some kind of crazy person, or are they actually a time traveler, who needs the mayo in order to get back to their right time? Perhaps there is more to this story, than what is written.

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Climate change - temperatures rising, the ice caps melting, and so much more. There is evidence, but are we looking at it right, or are we misinterpreting it in some manner, either through fear, or personal bias. what is the truth of the evidence? Is the issue minor, with everyone blowing it out of proportion, or is the situation more serious than we even know? These are very good questions to ask.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of The Painting  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
A woman buys a painting for their apartment, hanging it in their bedroom. However, whenever she sleeps, she gets some rather odd dreams, and none of them are very good. Finally, after a while, she decides to burn it, in hopes of getting a good night's rest. Only, things do not turn out as they had hoped.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of The Tree of Life  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Trees - they live for so long, some live longer than a human's lifespan. They see a lot of things - good, bad, and all between. Sometimes one looks at a big one, and wonders what all has it seen? How many children have played under it? How many pets, or people, rest eternally in its shade? One has to wonder these things.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Barbarism  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Mankind's savagery - they way we treat each other, and the world. It is well-known that mankind can be very brutal towards others, with all the weapons and the like that we have. However, another thing to keep in mind is when we can indeed be kind, even towards those who are our enemies. This is also something to keep in mind, especially when traveling in the dark parts of our history.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Revelations (or something close to it) has come, and angels are showing up, only, they aren't nice. One person, among others, manages to make it into a haberdashery for shelter. However, there are those who try to take their chances, but, no matter their religion, they don't make it. Will the Protagonist make it? Read to find out.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
Due to the language used, and violence depicted, might want to bump this to 13+.

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Review of Sink or Swim  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Pain - a constant annoyance that feels like it is killing us. It comes in many forms - physical, mental, emotional, and more. There are times you feel like you can't escape it, as it is always there to remind you. Well, there is one good thing about pain - it means that you're still alive, which is a very good thing.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Someone is running, being chased, yet unable to hear the pursuer. They are trying to avoid them, while trying to puzzle out what's going on. Then, they realize why they can't hear, just in time for something to happen near them, knocking them to the ground. Now, in addition to the question of if they are still being followed, they have another - Why can't they see?

Characters
The characters seem interesting, and I wonder what will happen to them. Will this be like something akin to Blind Fury?

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar. However, due to the use of a certain swear word, you might want to bump this up to 18+ in terms of rating.

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Review of Neglect  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An interesting poem to read. It talks about inner turmoil being masked by a false outer calm, as one goes through life. Might make one wonder what is being left unsaid, and what the inner conflict is about. Is it the person's own opinions, or is it some sort of secret, which might lead to trouble if folks find out about it.

Thoughts
An interesting poem to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestion
Might want to turn off the thing for smaller font, as that can be difficult for some folks to read.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
A witch tries to read a strange image in a tea leaf stain. The image looks like one of two things - good things, and death. This causes a bit of confusion - how can death be a good thing? She, and her client soon find the answer when a dragon shows up to attack. So, what's the truth of the image? Read to find out.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of The kite  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Beware the kite - fast at flight. An interesting poem with a metaphor, and a lesson or two. Translation of it is a warning to young women to not just fall for handsome young men, especially before they have graduated from high school, or even collage, or university. An interesting read.

Thoughts
An interesting poem to read.

Spelling and Grammar
In the Summary section, "cautionibg" needs to be "cautioning" and "theur" needs to be "their".

Suggestion
Given what the final word is, might want to bump this up to 18+ instead of 13+.

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Review of Pick Me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Sometimes one wants to be picked first - a first friend, a partner, a lover, someone to do a job or activity with. Sometimes, it feels like we're never chosen. Sometimes we just want to be picked by someone. Sometimes we are, sometimes we're not. So, one of the things we must do is choose ourselves, so that we might have a chance.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Joey's Prayer  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Well, this is a cute poem, about a boy praying to God, thanking him for all the good things in his life - friends, family, fun times, and so on. This is something that any could relate to, as they might want to wish for good things, and are thankful when they happen. After all, one enjoys their friends, family, pets, and more.

Thoughts and Characters
An interesting piece with interesting characters.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting poem - or set of poems. They talk about a place that once thrived, but ended up falling into some sort of trouble. Was it by fire, or flood, or both? One has to wonder what happened to this shining beacon of light, which is now nothing more than a ruin. An enjoyable little read.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read tonight.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Universal Rivalry  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a cute little story, about the Sun and Moon, and how the Goddesses of them met. This is worth a good chuckle. Sun Goddess gets bored, as there's nothing going on in her area. Then she hears that there's other Gods, and goes to meat them. The Moon Goddess is watching over a planet, where the inhabitants like to sleep, wondering if there's more. Then the Sun and Moon meet, and trouble starts. Got to laugh.

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar. However, space between paragraphs might help.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
A look at one's self is something we must do on occasion. Sometimes, all we see is trouble, and darkness. But then, we take another look. Then, we take a closer look. Once we do that, we might see something wonderful. What is this wonderful thing? Why, it's our inner light, shining bright, for all to see.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Images Of Autumn  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A nice poem to read at this time of year. Talking of Autumn and Halloween, and what goes on during it, from the various leaves moving around, the chill in the air, the pumpkins being out on porches, and of course, black cats walking on by. Makes one just chuckle at the thoughts.

Thoughts
A perfect poem to read at this time of year.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling and grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Beneath the Armor  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A soldier trying to prepare for some rest and relaxation is annoyed by the ticking of a clock, so they put an end to the ticking. However, things become even worse, as she soon realizes that the ticking was what kept her sanity in check. She soon hears some more noises, and she doesn't know if it's friend or foe outside her door.

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An interesting campfire to read. A group of anthropomorphic creatures called Humanimals have lived on a certain planet for about a century or so. They know that they were created by humans, though the how has been lost for a while. But now, the mysteries of the past are being uncovered by an unlikely group. What truths will be uncovered? Read to find out.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar, so far.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Ah, the "Let's Make Funny Faces" Game - make a goofy grin, stick out your tongue, and more, all to see who can do something crazy. All in a bit of fun. Turns out, this is a great way to relax, laugh, as well as make ourselves look, and feel, younger, not to mention get rid of stress. Very interesting.

Thoughts
An interesting piece, which made me laugh.

Spelling and Grammar
You have a number of "i"s that need to be "I"s instead. Likewise, there's a "kike" that needs to be "like" instead. Also, you need some space after commas and periods. Finally, space between paragraphs to make reading easier.

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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This looks like the start of an interesting story. You have someone, who looks like they just saw a murder. They try to keep quiet, to avoid giving their position away. However, it seems that someone has found them, and they aren't the sort that wants to help them out. Makes one wonder what will happen next.

Characters
The characters seem interesting. I wonder what will happen next.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Friendship  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Ah, friendship - I remember a scene in a McDonold's movie - Scared Silly it was (perfect for this time of the year) - from The Wacky Adventures of Ronald McDonald. Basically, the gang had entered a "haunted house" and members of the gang get abducted when they fall for traps and the like (don't worry - it's a kids' movie), until Ronald and a few others find themselves face-to-face with the Phantom, who challenges them to a Riddle Contest. The riddle that determines if the gang wins, asks, "What costs nothing, but is worth everything? Weighs nothing, but lasts a lifetime? That one person can't own, but two people can share?" - The answer is, of course, Friendship - a treasure that that folks share, which lasts forever.

Thoughts
You just made me remember a movie I used to enjoy as a kid. Good on you.

Spelling and Grammar
I believe that "Weak" should be "Weaken" - that would make more sense.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this looks like the start of an interesting story. Set in a distant dystopian future, a corporation has taken over everything - what to wear, what to watch, and more - heck, the TV is used as a spying tool. However, there seems to be some sort of Resistance group trying to fight for justice in this world.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
You might want some space between paragraphs. Makes reading easier.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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