First of all, let me just say that this is great! I was just meandering through the plugs here and was unexpectedly moved by this short piece. You did well by creating an immersive experience in just a few words. The only critiques that I truly have are a few grammatic errors, which everyone makes now and again. This is a very good piece.
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