"The flowers that bloom to smile on earth,
Which has given it colour, its life and worth."<===Great line! I enjoyed your poem very much!
I am not sure but is "colour" suppose to be "color"?
I may be totally wrong there. Anyway great poem!
I wrote a piece about eyes as well. The eyes are very powerful, they can leave a lasting impression. It is what you do with that impression that is important. Everyday we grow smarter, wiser, the world can be a wonderful place all you have to do is use youe eyes to look theough the horror of our society. Great Writing!!! Andrew The Clockwatcher
Interesting poem, and very true. Everything that we ever do has a ripple effect that lasts forever; even after ones passing. Nicely done and Welcome to Writing.com!
Your words are not wasted on me. I understand and agree with you. Honestly most people wont ever know the real you, but that is okay because they don't even know themselves. You know who you are and you know your thoughts are not wrong. To hard to explain to the people who are not open. So as you keep your mouth shut, give yourself a smile, you deserve it!
That is what it is like and it is also so much more,
It's that belly laugh from the funny movie
It's that kiss that sends you tingling
It's getting up in the morning and having another day
I like your writing style, you put it right there on the plate, it's something I wish I could do. You are quite talented. I think you may have one tiny typo though "soo" should be "so" Or at least I think so. Nice job!
There is always time to die. I am one who most likely will die soon not by my hands but by the hands of many others. I feel sadness, I feel happness, I feel pain. But I still feel. Dying is no answer to life. I think that is what you meant. That is what I took from it. Nicely done!
This was one of the best storys that I have ever read it left me keep guessing, is it true? is it true? Then I thought it doesn't matter if it is true or not it kept my mind off my own problems for a bit. The subway comercials use to call the employees sub artists or something like that; you are a creater with a great gift for making sandwiches and enlighting the soul. Do you think you could send the witch my way? LOL
It is a great thing that you trying to get the ball rolling. I certainly have done my share of reviews, but I don't get nearly the amount back. I am wondering if it is because much of my material is to dark? Anyway glad you are here!
I liked it of course,partly because the subject intrest me so much. I am striken with this stupid Aids. However I am lucky enough to have drugs that seem to be extending my life. The poor people in Africa not so much as a parent to help them through because Aids has taken them all. I feel for them and for every person who suffers in this world.
So far so good, you are definitly doing a great job explaining, something that is so vast. How would one describe the ocean in a small amount of words? It simply can't be done. So If I was wearing a hat it would be off to you right now; so instead I will remove my hairpiece for a moment.
Another fine piece you have wrote, I find myself a little funny to think I could review a piece of yours and give you any real good advice, well I can say this, I enjoyed it is worth every stroke of your keys and once again holds my interest with an admiration and sheer jeaolousy of your talent. My only criticism is that I could really give you is that, I should have wrote it first!
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