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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
You have me gripped. I've read none of the previous chapters or the following chapters. But I am curious about so many things in this story.

The interaction between these two characters feels as uncomfortable and stiff as the case they are investigating, yet there is a feeling of safety and trust between the two of them which convinces me that they care quite a bit about each other and the story.

I mentioned that I've not read any of the other chapters, but from this chapter I received answers to questions which I am sure must be burning in the readers that followed this story from the beginning. I do believe however that all the answers are not revealed yet.

I like the fact that you give just enough information about the surroundings of the characters to make the reader aware of the change of scenery. You are not describing everything around them to the death.

The plot seems to be simple but I suspect you have a few plots interwoven in this story. For me to understand that, I'll have to read the whole book.

Thank you for sharing this chapter with me.
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