nice actually perfect expressions in short and sweet words very meaningful should take pride fro writing such beautiful poem i always kept on trying to write any poems on animals but never succeeded but you have done justice to the puppies and their life
nice thoughts, great rhyme scheme in the beginning of the article but does this refers to the cycle of rebirth or just creation ?
its better if u format it at certain places such as
"more specifically no plan; No Method " by sending "No Method " in next line as it gives an unwanted sense of laziness, similar unfaormatiing is seen at few other places take care & keep writing similar articels
very emotional the feelings expressed clearly speaks that either u r expecting or was recently. in the second last line if u leave the word " try " for the next line so that there will be a rimeing with the repetition of the word " me ".
ur last line sweeps the whole world & can be interperated in a number of ways a kind of ambiguity with a tinge of clarity.
will be looking for more writ ups from u
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