Excellent job :D Considering this was written so long ago, and with no real writing experience to go with it, the back and forth in dialogue was impressive. You wrote with passion and confidence, something that really shines through.
I'm not one for Romance stories usually, and this just came up in my rate and review link, but I enjoyed it. It was a short woeful story, well-written and a little on the mundane side. But that mundanity worked with the rest of it, and as such, it came out a sweet little morsel of a genre otherwise unexplored.
Well, written. However, you should provide a summary of what it is you're speaking against/about. Chalk it up to me not being as up to date with current events as I should be, but I don't really know what you're talking about.
I am able to put somethings into context though, and as an atheist I agree with your ideas on how we should move forward in respect. If I understood said ideas correctly.
Again, well written. But maybe a more rounded out picture for the casual observer would be more effective.
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