I assume this was set by a tutor in a creative writing class. 300 words is always a challenge - You need a few more to really catch the drama. I have re-written many times my 300 word short stories.
But good imagination - keep writing
Rob McC (Askpaddy)
Hi
What a lovely idea nicely told. What age is Taeden?
Did she understand words such as "Earth Spirits"?
I have attempted children's stories but have trouble pitching them at an age group and the words appropriate to them.
If you have a moment the following is aimed at 6/8 year olds - throughts would be welcomed http://www.writing.com/main/portfolio.php?action=e...
You take care
Rob McC (askpaddy)
Hi Sherri
After all your kind remarks about my work i was complelled to visit yours. Dear me you are a troubled soul.
You must have had a terrible youth! Cheer up girl,look on the bright side, i guess you're still warm and in the upright position.
i'm off to visit your website. You can visit mine at www.askpaddy.com - planning to put my writing efforts on a blog - probably will call it Robs Irish Stew.
You take care
Thanks again
Rob McConnell (askpaddy)
Hi Dead Melodies
You seem to be writing sad poems - I've read the one about drugs and loosing friends. Cheer up you never know when your next relationship will pop up - have a read at "Sand Between my Toes" in my portfolio its a short more or less true story. I felt like you till Anne arrived.
Keep writing
Take Care
Askpaddy
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