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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
this peice is amazing! i have been in this situation and if this is from experiance i hope it gets better for you. you get the point across and thats pretty koolz. i love the line"no pain or torture is wrse than losing love". and i wuz tryin to make this seem all fancy and junk cz thats what ive seen ppl on here do but mostly i just want to say u r an epic writer so keep on writin and stuffz.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
i love the overall poem but it useed words i couldnt understand. but the image it put in my mind was beautiful.
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