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Review of Storm Song  Open in new Window.
Review by C.E. Thieroff Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Richard,
Again nicely done. Great imagery and sense of power your words convey. A very nice poem to visualize in ones head.
Keep on writin'
Chuck
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Review of I Like Spiders  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Richard,
Great piece. Rhyme & Meter were excellent. Great imagery and attention to detail.
Chuc
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Review of Frozen Chicken  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Richard,
Heh Heh heh, this piece cracked me up. There are time that I wish my head was off too. I certainly identify with the chicken. Great piece and way too funny *Wink* . Thank you for the write I certainly enjoyed it. That will be all for tonight. It is 10 PM here and I have a 12 hour day at work tomorrow so I need to rest. I'll read some more as time allows.
Chuck
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Review by C.E. Thieroff Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Irishkatie,
Just a terrific piece. I really identify with this piece. I have a friend named Nance who I write a lot about and post on WDC. She is alcoholic and leads a secret life like the man in your poem. The outside looks oh so good and she has it all going on, good looks, great career, respect of her peers, money etc and she also has this terrible deep dark side to her that is just killing her and that she tries to hide form everyone else. You write with such passion and feeling and I have a great deal of respect for that.
Thank you for sharing.
Chuck
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Review of Indebted  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi strlcuckoo,

Nicely done work that reflects the need for gratitude in one's life. Thank you for posting it, I enjoyed the read.
Chuck
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Review of Loathing  Open in new Window.
Review by C.E. Thieroff Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Nayami,
I enjoyed this terse poem. The twist at the end was beautifully done. My favorite part is the last verse
It has been sharpened to perfection
Cleaned and polished unitl it shined
Yet still I see it dripping in blood
The blade that is his smile.
Fortunely this type or reaction mellows with age as experience and wisdom grow. Again nicely done kudos to you for a fine effort
Chuck
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