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Review of Ocean Fun  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi my name is Becky, I liked the name of the poem so I decided to read it. I enjoyed the poem it is cute.

The repetitiveness of "she screeched" is understandable for such a short poem. I wonder if you should of made a different use of words. But I liked the flow and rhythm of the poem.

Keep up the good work.

Becky
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Review of The Sea Shell Man  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi my name is Becky and I liked the name of the story so decided to read it.

I like the first line, it pulls you into the story. The first paragraph would be a great beginning to a longer story. The second paragraph doesn't really make as much sense. The last sentence doesn't make sense to me. I don't know if there are spelling errors or just misunderstood.

I enjoyed the visuals within the story, Well done. Good job.

Becky
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Review of Destination Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The poem itself is nicely written. There is good rhyming throughout the poem. I wonder if the stanzas should be shorter or of the same length. I'm wondering if the last stanza should repeat Destination --- Love? Or if it should just be stated once. I enjoyed reading the poem, its good.

Becky
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The expressions of the emotions throughout the short poem are written creatively. Nicely done. It shows individuality on your part which people like to see. Good job.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Very nice to be so thoughtful of your need is a time of need. Nicely expressed. Good job.
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Review of Embrace Yourself  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Well written, I think a bit longer would be nice. It is nice to see inspirational items on this site. So much negativity in this world a bit of light is nice. Good job. Keep writing.
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Review of Beauty  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Walter very nice poem, as time goes by we humans often forget what true beauty really is.
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Review of THREE OF A KIND  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Well done.
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Review of Girlhood  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a well written story, creative, thoughtful, truthful, and nicely put together. I've decided to recommend it for an award. Nicely done.


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Review of BE A CHILD  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I'm not sure exactly what you are saying, I seem to get lost.
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Review of Somebody's Cat  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This story is cute and very entertaining, I appreciate the love for cats so even more. Good story.
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Review of Never, And Again  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Truthfully written with someone who has a disease such as dementia or other mental diseases. I like the story.
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Review of Hunger  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Very well written, I like the comparison of items. Well done.
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Review by becbec Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is nicely written, good flow, vivid sciences. Good job.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Jon cena of course.
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Review of Naturlicious  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Good crossword.
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Review of Wrong Send  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Great poem. Good rhyming, good rhythmic pace. Grammar and punctuation well written. Humorous, yet serious. The error of sending to the wrong person.
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Review of Basic Decencies  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I found this humorous, but truthful. Then more annoying if you do all the above, yet they do none. Truthful and to the point.

Good job.

Becky
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Review of Chief Jimbob  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Vocabulary
The story has a great variety of vocabulary, which makes the story more interesting.

Grammar
There are a few grammar issues throughout the story: unplaced commas, a few periods missing, and the use of question marks. Misspelled words, such as; cozily, cozy, realizing.

Story line
The lost soul living in a harsh world, which seems to define him. Try and try again, only to fall back down.

Characters
Well written, each defining themselves throughout the story.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
The saga continues....good word game.
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Review by becbec Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Cynically I believe we are in danger.
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Review by becbec Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
If we live by technology in the future it scares me, I'd rather just have a good book and a cup of tea.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
The question is odd, I'm not sure what psychological study this fall's under, but I find it strange.
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Review by becbec Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I believe some if my writings could be written better.
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Review of Would you...?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I would try the police, but they really don't seem to amount to much in the town that I live in.
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