I really enjoyed this piece. Especially the line "crying privately at the loss of his life did not equal love" This line hits at the mass insecurity of peoples fear of others opinions of them if they display any sort of weakness around others. I can relate to failing at everything in life, even suicide. I would appreciate any reviews I think you might like my newest poem called the great void. This was awesome
Hi I am new to writing.com I have a lot of passion for writing. I have five poems in my portfolio and my latest one called The Great Void could really use some reviews. I second guess myself about whether or not I have any potential to be a writer and appreciate any feedback
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