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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Although your grammar and word choice leave a lot to be desired, I find your idea very amusing. You can really become a great comedy writer if you keep doing these bizzare ideas! Welcome the community, and I hope you write like your life depends on it!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
You seem to have a mind that strikes quite a chord when you play Halo, especially at Christmas apparently. If anything, this should be filed under "poetry", the use of figurative language gives way to poetic feeling. Have you considered writing poetry?
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
The story of a person who found out that what started as an innocent little thing, started to go towards the more perverted end, and that other person didn't care at all. I kinda think that's what's going on here, but I was having a little bit of trouble interpreting the poem. I really think it's just me though, so keep doing what you're doing!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a very well done poem. The description of a fisher is very imaginative and helps the brain really paint a mental picture. Now I will admit, I have never fished in my life, but I can see how you really put fishing into a very interesting light.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Although I rarely bowl, I still enjoy the sport. This poem caught my eye, and when I read it, I found quite a true message. The meaning that was imparted on me was that to really enjoy Bowling, you just need to get out and do it, as long as you have a good time it will always be a winning game.
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Review by BinaryHedgehog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (1.0)
Okay... um... could not follow this story at all, needs a major overhaul, I'll get back when it looks more professional.
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