First of all, thanks for reviewing my story Why Were You Screaming Last Night. I really needed some kind of feedback for it.
But anyways. . THis piece is really troubling, and I guess that's why I like it so much. If I can share an experience I had, my best friend was killed by a drunk driver and sometimes I had these weird, compulsive thoughts of his voice telling me to die too. So yes, it's a very troubling experience, and this piece makes it all the more real for me and everyone. Thanks for sharing.
Very sad, but very good. I especially like the line,"Don't go to my funeral. We've been to enough. . ."I can relate to that. A lot of my friends died when I was younger. Great job
awesome job, dude. I love what you did here. I feel like that's definitely how a lot of writers, including me, sometimes feel. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing!
I'm not really sure what style you are using, but I rather enjoyed this poem quite a bit. The use of repitition was really well executed, at least in my opinion.
Hey, this piece I really liked only because it was short and I could relate to it a lot. I like short pieces that get to the point the best. I couldn't really find anything to critique, the only thing I will say is keep writing, and I look forward to reading more.
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