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Review of Red Dog  Open in new Window.
Review by kai corbin Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
very abstract. interesting. please explain.
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Review of wisdom  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I liked it. makes you think.
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Review by kai corbin Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
one thing you should work on, and im not trying to bust your chops, this is purely constructive criticism, no more clichés. love changes everything. yes, PREACH! but get that message across with less cliché. a good idea; try free verse. never shy away from trying something new when it comes to poetry. I was gonna give you a rating of 2.0, but the ideas in this poem are legitimate. they show potential. work that.
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Review by kai corbin Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
wow..........
wow..........
so.. so... powerful.
brought tears.
i loved it.
nicely done!
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Review of The Invisible Man  Open in new Window.
Review by kai corbin Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
that was so good, I kinda wanna write you a story. AWESOME LETTERS klajhaluhfiuhweiugiyfffffffffgyuyfuyfyudtlottsitaeritrkicgtopuibviyvtydjwi34jjrhhqkljwlbdbbejiiskbaposihdf;klsbncbjzxbkiuhdoioei.a;aksjhdiufh;woosihealksjdhfiouwpioudh.ah;jshoeruith seriously, bro. get famous.
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Review of The Performance  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
wow! that was fantastic. I sincerely hope you win that contest. nicely done!!!!:)
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