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for entry "May 8 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The blogger stamped the day for another beautiful day in Wisconsin, with temperatures around 65 degrees and clear skies, signalling the arrival of spring. The author enjoyed the sounds of nature, including birds and frogs. She expressed appreciation for a Facebook friend, Deb Warren, who shares beautiful nature photography, providing a virtual escape when outdoor visits aren't possible.

In contrast, the fire marshal tested the alarms, creating a chaotic experience at 924 Jackson St, leading to noise from construction work that caused discomfort.

The blogger reflected on her need for loneliness, indicating that a lack of quiet time can lead to restlessness.The blogger shared a touching moment regarding the author's feelings for her mother, expressing the deepest love and longing.

The author intended to write a poem in her memory but struggled to find the right words to convey her emotions.

Lastly, the blog post mentioned the election of a new pope, expressing hope that he would embody the same compassion as Pope Francis. The author stressed the need for strong, caring leadership to navigate the challenging times faced both in the United States and globally, concluding with a prayer for the new pope to remain unaffected by political pressures.


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for entry "May 8 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The blogger remembered that beautiful weather, with sunshine and a pleasant temperature of 65 degrees, setting a perfect tone for the weekend. Many people engaged in various activities such as bowling, camping, or simply enjoying time indoors. The blogger focused on preparation for her college, acknowledging the challenges of involvement in the application process but expressing determination to succeed. With classes beginning in the fall, there was a sense of urgency but also a recognition of the time available to complete the necessary steps.

The author planned to take one or two classes initially, indicating a gradual approach to her education.In addition to college preparations, the blogger dedicated time to working on her blog and portfolio and also intended to write a heart-touching poem for her mother in celebration of Mother's Day.
The blogger decided to give her cleaner a day off, valuing personal space and the need for a break from constant social interactions. While she appreciated the company and recognized the importance of solitude for her well-being.

Lastly, the author expressed a heart-touching prayer for their family and friends in Texas, wishing them peace and success in her attempts. That told us the significance of family connections and the desire for collective well-being.


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for entry "May 7 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The beautiful weather made the day memorable, with sunshine and a pleasant temperature of 70 degrees, setting a positive tone for the weekend. Many people engaged in various activities such as bowling, camping, or simply enjoying time indoors.

The blogger focused on preparation for her college, acknowledging the challenges involved in the application process but expressing determination to succeed. With classes starting in the fall, there was a sense of urgency but also a recognition of the time available to complete the necessary steps.

The author planned to take one or two classes initially, indicating a gradual approach to her education.In addition to college preparations, the blogger dedicated time to working on her blog and portfolio and also intended to write a heart-touching poem for her mother in celebration of Mother's Day.

The author decided to give her cleaner a day off, valuing personal space and the need for a break from constant social interactions. While she appreciated the company and recognized the importance of solitude for her well-being.

Lastly, the author expressed a heart-touching prayer for their family and friends in Texas, wishing them peace and success in her attempts.

That told us the significance of family connections and the desire for collective well-being.


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for entry "May 6 2025 " Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
That day began with pleasant weather, presenting bright sunshine and a comfortable temperature of 68 degrees that reminded us of spring on our doorstep. This change in weather positively impacted the narrator's mood, especially after experiencing throbbing and soreness likely due to the drastic shift in conditions.

The activation of air conditioning in the blogger's building was a welcome relief, ensuring comfort during both day and night.On the academic front, the narrator prepared to tackle a to-do list that included a placement test in reading and writing, a necessary step before starting college classes in the fall.

This timeline allowed for ample opportunity to focus on writing projects, particularly on writing.com.The day was also spent managing household tasks and putting away groceries and laundry items and also allowing time for the narrator's mother to do the remaining. Despite the busy schedule, the teller expressed a sense of purpose and fulfilment in her daily activities, stressing a commitment to writing and a positive outlook for the future.

The blog post concluded with a warm wish for a productive day of writing, highlighting the joy found in work and creativity.


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for entry "May 4 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The blogger experienced a beautiful pink sunrise. She won't forget it easily and anticipated a pleasant day with sunny weather at 65 degrees, contrasting with the often gloomy clouds. She expressed that the sunrise could bring a positive mood for her and a desire to maintain it, acknowledging the emotional toll. She also wished to write a book about that.

She could recognize the common struggles of writers; she mentioned the need for a break and the importance of taking some rest.

In addition to her writing attempts, the author planned to write a poem if time allowed and continued working on her portfolio, noting that progress was slow. For relaxation, she intended to watch a favourite childhood movie that she still enjoyed.

The author also reviews the fact of adopting a kitten sooner than planned but recognized the need to focus on her current commitments.Finally, she extended well wishes to everyone in Washington D.C., expressing a heart-touching prayer for their safety in mind, body, and soul.


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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Carrying a diary with you, especially when you are travelling, is a fruitful and healthy habit. You can note down everything you see as notable without editing. You can add those scenes in your writing if you wish to do so. That process will increase your readability. Even those writings are helpful for self-interpretations.


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for entry "May 3 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The blogger began her day early, looked after the weather, and expressed a desire for spring in the middle of cold and rainy conditions. She noted the forecast of partly cloudy and sunny weather with a high of 53 degrees, reflecting on the lack of interest in the current season.

In terms of productivity, the author planned to work on her portfolio and potentially write a poem, hoping for a quiet Saturday free from interruptions. She shared the sense of achievement after completing the revisions on her book, feeling confident in her work after multiple edits and readings.

However, she faced an uncertainty about her next project, looking after whether to pursue a children's book or a poetry collection, contingent on her financial situation.

The blogger concluded on a positive note, wishing well for her writing community and expressing a desire for healing and strength for everyone involved. Overall, the text captures a blend of personal reflection, creative ambition, and a sense of community support.


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for entry "May 2 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The blogger showed the reflection on a rainy day, expressing her desire for sunshine and warmth while noting the forecast of cool temperatures for the next few days. This weather prompts feelings of longing for companionship, particularly in remembrance of her late husband, who passed away nearly seven years ago. Despite the sadness, the author took pride in her accomplishments during this time, having written three books, and also believes her husband would be proud.That day's plans included shopping and relaxing at home, with a particular focus on purchasing a printer as a reward for her hard work in writing. The blogger admired the beauty of her neighbour's flower-filled lawn, which added a touch of joy to the dreary weather.

She also planned to write and maintain a journal, which served as a therapeutic tool recommended by her therapist. The author shared her stories and poetry with the therapist, too, who appreciated her work, although she wasn't sure if the therapist had purchased any of her extra books.

In a heart-touching conclusion, the author extended blessings to the community, wishing for strength and healing for everyone involved in writing, stressing a sense of connection and support among fellow writers.


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This monologue captures the emotional turmoil of the speaker struggling with self-doubt and the fear of public embarrassment after receiving a rejection from a literary journal.

The speaker's reflection on a significant mistake made in a poem, where confusion takes place in the mythological characters, attributing the act of pushing a stone up a hill to Atlas instead of Sisyphus. This blunder leads to feelings of shame and embarrassment, as the writer imagines the editor and literary community mocking the self-error.

The narrative focuses on that weakness which comes with creative expression, illustrating how a single mistake can feel like a disastrous failure. The writer's internal dialogue discloses a deep-seated fear of being judged and ridiculed, leading to thoughts of abandoning self-craft altogether. The use of humour and exaggeration, such as the imagined scene of editors laughing over the mistake, underlines the intensity of the speaker's feelings.Ultimately, this monologue serves as a mournful feeling. It's a reminder of the challenges faced by artists, particularly the fear of inadequacy and the pressure to meet literary standards.

The writer's experience echoed with anyone who has faced rejection or criticism, stressing the importance of flexibility and the willingness to learn from mistakes in the creative process.


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for entry "May 1 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The blogger shared her exciting news about returning to college on a part-time basis, starting in the upcoming fall semester.

She expressed her excitement for this new chapter in her life and a dedication to her personal growth. The author also mentioned her ongoing engagement with writing, particularly on a platform that she considered as a second home.The blogger noted the weather as rainy, prompting reflections on the desire for sunnier days and warmer seasons.

Additionally, the author described ongoing construction work involving solar panel installation on their roof, indicating a readiness to adapt to potential noise disruptions.In terms of her personal projects, the author planned to focus on completing her portfolio and a poem that remained unfinished. She accepted this challenge of balancing the school with her writing activities on this platform, expressing a cautious approach to the course load, considering starting with just one class.

The blogger also mentioned a desire to launch a book-selling business, although the author placed it on the back burner for this goal.

Overall, she carried a sense of determination to manage her commitments effectively while running after her educational and creative interests.


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Review of the wall.  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Writer's block comes suddenly in an author's life. In that period, he can't create anything substantial. After a whole day's work, either the page remains blank, or it finds scratched paper in the bin and ultimately creates none. Overall, it is painful situations. It stays for a while.

It comes suddenly; fortunately, one day, you'll also find it disappears without any notice. You will begin to create anything as usual. But you can't forget those intolerable painful days anyway.

It's an excellent creation.
Write on!


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for entry "April 30 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The cloudiness was the speciality of yesterday's weather, with expected rainfall at night. Forecasters indicated that the region would be experiencing a typical amount of spring rain, which is generally acceptable for the season.In a personal achievement, the blogger proudly announced the completion of her book, expressing confidence in its readiness for publication.

However, she noted the need to secure funding to finalize the publishing process. The author also shared her passion for writing and her pride in the literary works.

Additionally, the blogger planned to work on her portfolio and a poem without wasting any further delay.

Meanwhile, the authority scheduled the maintenance work in the apartments, including the installation of new alarm systems. The author expressed some anxiety about the noise and disturbance that would cause, particularly since testing had already begun early in the morning.

At last, the blogger extended blessings and prayers to the members of WDC, hoping for a productive day for all, especially for those facing challenges in their lives.


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for entry "April 28 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This particular blog post shows us the blogger's early morning routine, enlightening us about her self-struggle with sleep and the decision to write at 5:00 AM.

The blogger mentions the ongoing home improvements, including roof work and the installation of solar panels, which will increase the property's construction. The author is almost completing her book; just two chapters are left to write, and she acknowledges the need for further revisions to ensure the accuracy.

She expresses a preference for writing in quiet environments, contrasting her present city life with the calmness of the countryside. The author looks thoroughly at visiting her sister's place to finish a novel she has been working on, noting that writing novels presents more challenges but is achievable with the right setting.

The post concludes with a personal reflection on the significance of writing in the author's life, describing it as an expression of her soul.

The author also extends well wishes to the community, stressing the importance of making connections and true support.


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for entry "April 27, 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The blogger enlightened on her day, focusing on her plans to work on a blog and portfolio and, most importantly, write a poem, which she anticipated would be sad.

She expressed a struggle with delaying tactics and a sense of lethargy, assigning it to feelings of depression despite being on medication. The author noted that her family didn't fully understand her mental health challenges, leading to misunderstandings about her medication use and emotional state.Despite these challenges, the blogger managed to step outside briefly, appreciating the fresh air, and opened her windows for some light.

She concluded her day by deciding to wrap up her blog and reach out to friends, expressing a sense of community and well-wishes for others.

Overall, this blog post pointed out the author's ongoing battle with mental health. The importance of self-realization in small successes.


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for entry "April 26, 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The blogger shared a delightful experience of shopping with a friend, where they purchased clothes and a new purse, enjoying the pleasant spring weather. She also earned a pair of stylish glasses, which she felt enhanced her appearance and boosted her confidence.

However, the author faced a restless night, struggling to sleep since early morning but managing to function throughout the day. Her experience noted even patchy sleep was better than none. The sounds of birds' songs signalling a new day were going to start.

In terms of her writing, the author needed a final adjustment for her book, setting a deadline for the following week to complete the ending and repolish the story finally. While she expressed uncertainty about finishing a poem that day, she committed to working on it and her portfolio.

That blog post concluded with a warm message wishing safety and well-being to everyone in Washington, D.C.


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for entry "April 25 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Stacy, known as Beacon, recently reached out to share that she is currently facing significant family issues, which have left her feeling obsessed and unable to participate in WDC activities for a few times. She also reassured that she is physically okay and sends her best wishes to everyone, indicating that she plans to return again when her situation stabilizes. That message shows us the importance of community, especially WDC, and the impact of individual members.

The blogger enlightens us to the fact of the lasting connections within the group, stressing that friendships can fade but the memories and support shared are the same. To show solidarity with Stacy during her challenging times, the author suggests organizing a card collection to provide her with encouragement, despite her preference for privacy. The idea is to have an appropriate person for referring to herself as the "legendary mask".

In closing, the author expresses affection for the group and a commitment to staying connected, indicating a desire to continue communication and support among members.


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for entry "April 24 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The blogger described a calm and quiet morning, waking up to a bright sunrise characterized by a blend of obsessed natural beauty. The pleasant temperature of 72 degrees allowed her to open the windows, inviting in the sunshine.
Observing nature, the blogger thoroughly noted how her plant's leaves were reaching toward the sun. At the same time, those long grasses and blooming flowers signalled the arrival of spring, despite concerns about allergies for her pet, Gracie.

In terms of trying very hard to create something new, the author made significant progress on her book, "Sheldon Learns a Lesson" and was completing two revisions. She expressed her satisfaction with her writings and decided to take a break to focus on poetry ideas. As a poet, she highlighted that she offers a unique perspective on the world through her writing.


Additionally, the blogger planned to engage in spring cleaning with the help of a friend who would assist in organizing her apartment. This effort is targeted to create a more reachable living space, reflecting the seasonal theme of renewal and tidiness.


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for entry "April 23 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The blogger focused on her ongoing several personal projects, including working on her blog, cleaning up her portfolio, and completing a poem which she had started a few days ago.

She also planned to contact a freelancer, Hana A, on a freelance marketplace to initiate work on her next children's book, considering the potential benefits of different artistic styles for her for that project.The weather remained rainy and damp in Wisconsin with temperatures in the high 50s. She had an enormous indoor personal projects to keep herself busy.

The weather forecast wasn't hopeful, indicating the rain would continue for the next four days with humidity.

Spring was in full swing, with trees and flowers blooming, and the author observed it with an intense interest like others. There is an increase in local wildlife, including a notable presence of white or albino deer.

Additionally, the author mentioned ongoing construction work on her roof, specifically the installation of solar panels. Rain created an enormous obstruction to the workers. The noisy times may increase from the project.

The author expressed hope that it would be complete within three to four months.In a thoughtful note, the author extended blessings to her community and expressed a desire for global peace, stressing her faith and prayers for healing and unity among humanity.
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for entry "April 22, 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The rain made the day special. It was also much needed due to low water table levels. That rainy weather forced her to concentrate on the indoor activities, working on the projects and writing.

The blogger spent that day cleaning the bedroom and setting up a new bed, although the entire process was challenging due to the mobility issues. The use of a walker made it difficult to organize, and there was a desire to transition to a quadrilateral cane size for better mobility.

In addition to personal organization, preparations for a yard sale were underway, with the intention of selling two large items that belonged to her late husband, Eddie. These items were no longer in use, as the doctor advised against using scooters, stressing the importance of walking instead.

The blog writer also dedicated some time to working on a portfolio and revising a completed book. The blogger is hopeful to present us an excellent book. We also hope so.
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for entry "April 21 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This blog post shows us passing of Pope Francis, expressing regards and respect for his global efforts for ensuring peace.

The blogger very wisely recalls a touching quote from the Pope, stressing the clear choice between war and peace.

In a personal update, the author shares the completion of her third book, titled "Sheldon Learns a Lesson" acknowledging the challenges of the rewriting process and inviting others to relate to this struggle. She also mentions plans to establish a book sales business under the name G. M. Crook, with assistance from a friend in Wisconsin.

Additionally, the blog writer expresses a desire to adopt a cat from a local shelter, Kitty Peloza, after three years of missing her previous cat, Sheldon. She stresses the real fact that the new pet will not be a replacement for her old cat, Sheldon. He has a sacred place in her heart. But this new pet will provide companionship to her.

The piece of writing concludes with a heart-touching message, encouraging global unity in remembrance of Pope Francis and urging everyone to turn their hearts and minds to God during this time of loss. I reckon that it's a very critical message. We ought to follow that.
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Review of It's Our Time  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The lyricist wrote this particular lyric to express the deep sense of doubt and commitment of a girl in a romantic relationship.The narrator acknowledged the challenges that she faced but stressed his constant support and belief in a brighter future together. The teller highlighted the sentiment of patience, suggesting despite the current difficulties, their love is proper. Something better is waiting for their future. Everything will be positive.


The speaker cherished the moments spent communicating with each other, describing the joy and comfort found in their conversations. The lyricist's portrait of the connection is nice. An upliftment with the speaker feeling a keen sense of happiness and anticipation, they heard from their partner. That imagery of time passing slowly when apart from that underlined the intensity of their feelings.

Additionally, this song hinted at that desire for freedom and adventure in love, inviting the partner to take a leap of faith and embrace the relationship fully. The speaker's open-mindedness about waiting for inspiration to complete the song suggests a creative process that mirrors the evolving nature of their relationship, indicating that their love story is still being written. It is endless.

Overall, that lyric captures the essence of hope, connection, and the beauty of love in its various stages.It is a wonderful creation.

Write on!
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for entry "April 18 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The day began with severe weather, featuring large ice balls falling from the sky and heavy rain, which transitioned into a cloudy and humid atmosphere. The completion of solar panel installation had a positive and mentionable development, prompting the blogger to focus on writing her blog as a way to reduce boredom.

A fascinating idea came about sharing poetries by placing a poem in a plastic case on a tree, inspired by a story from her podiatrist about his granddaughter's success in getting published after a similar act. The author planned to work on her portfolio and another poem, although they expressed uncertainty about completing a sonnet they were struggling with.

This blog post concluded with a heart-touching message wishing healing and blessings to the community, stressing a sense of support and hope for those in need.
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for entry "April 17 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The blogger shared her experience of dealing with a mild viral infection while trying to complete her blog post. Despite feeling unwell, she expressed optimism about her recovery by the following week. The arrival of spring brought joy, as trees began to bloom and the weather started to warm up.She mentioned her ongoing construction work, specifically the installation of solar panels, which was nearing completion. The was the blogger focused on as a positive outcome through the transformation of old buildings into beautiful apartments, despite the noise causing her headache. The author faced several challenges with typing due to swollen hands and opted to use speech-to-text technology. She anticipated rain and warmer weather in the coming days. As she concluded the blog, she expressed physical discomfort and a sore throat, reflecting on her worries and offering prayers for personal peace and for the chaotic state of the world around them.
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Review of yearning  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
"Yarning" is a well-thought-out writing effort. There is no doubt about it. The author creates it for the adult readers only.

The narrator becomes too isolated. There is a famous complete serenity. It is too quiet and waveless a life. This quietness is also intolerable. Acute loneliness is disgusting, too.We need excitement to feel that we remain alive.

We don't want a motionless lifestyle. The narrator also realizes the same.The author enlightens us about that fact. Therefore, it has a direct impact on our lives.It is an unbelievable beginning. But it has some errors.
Error:
1.I detect some grammatical mistakes.
2.I also find an overused expression.
Suggestion:
1.Beware of grammatical and spelling mistakes.
2.Overused expressions can hamper your writing's beauty. So, be careful about that mistake.

It is a brilliant beginning.

Keep writing.
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for entry "April 14 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The author began her day with a beautiful sunrise, which positively influenced her mood. She anticipated slightly warmer weather compared to the previous day and looked forward to spending time outdoors. Waking up early, even before the birds began to sing, set an echoing tone for the day.The blogger planned to focus on her portfolio and write a couple of poems, acknowledging that her recent poetry has been tinged with sadness due to the remembrance of her late husband's birthday, which would have been his 67th. She shared a deep connection with her late husband, Eddie, as she celebrated her birthdays together on the same date, focusing on the significance of their relationship.

However, the ongoing roof work by contractors caused distractions and discomfort, leading to a headache that hindered her concentration. The author intended to return online later in the day after the workers had finished for the day.
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