I marked your work as a favorite back in 2023. I am happy to see you are writing more! You have a unique point of view and a distinguishable voice. Watch your pacing, let us catch our breath. Lol! Beware adjectives and the passive voice. I stumbled over the sentence, "I only had to read slightly before they became worse than the flying gnat slash roach issue!" "Read slightly" is a bit awkward. Instead, use something like "Just two sentences in" or something more descriptive or direct than "read slightly." I hope this helps. I am a fan of your writing and your perspective. Another piece of advice: do not, under any circumstances, Google 'Palmetto Bug.'
Thought-provoking, to the point and true. Mother Nature has repeatedly shown that human greed will be our undoing. There needs to be more voices speaking up about this subject. I hope you will consider writing an article that provides even more detail about the greed, devastation, and waste of the seafood industry. Thank you for the heads up regarding the books. They are on my TBR list!
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