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Review by BostonFiction Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
A touching and rewarding poem.

I sense the author has regret in love and has hurt. This is what I sensed from the writing.

The poem itlsef has true meaning and a deeper message for all to adhere. Life is exactly like the writer shows, hard, unforgiving at times.

I liked this poem very much. I sense it was from the heart, which is the best place for poems of this quality.

Nice job!
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Review of To Crush A Rose  Open in new Window.
Review by BostonFiction Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
A very dark, painful and emotional poem. I feel that the writer poured him/herself out through this poem.

I truly liked the wording, flow and emotioanl pain the poem reveals.

My favorite stanza was;
You leave me to lie in this pool of roses
The smell sickens my senses
Roses are dead, my heart joins them
Darkness plays with my heart like a puppet
With strings of hate and pain

I feel this is the best stanza, but they are all quality. This one just struck me the best.

Great job!
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Review by BostonFiction Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Very nicely worded and written. I liked how the writer expressed her inner thoughts and how the flow of the song read.

The writer surely has inspiration and a beleif deeply inbedded inside her soul.

Keep writing and singing your heart out.
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Review of we will fly  Open in new Window.
Review by BostonFiction Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
An interesting poem and format. I noticed a few mispellings and typos, but as a reader I still can sense the meaning and felt with a little work, it could even better.

Keep writing on...
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Review by BostonFiction Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thanks ROAK for your two month extension. Here is something back. I hope this helps others like myself finding it hard to continue on WDC.
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Review by BostonFiction Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
The writer allows the reader to dee and feel as the writer embraces the nature around.

I liked the fact the writer used a Walter Whitman form and appreciates one of the more famous poets of the past.

I liked this poem very much. It brought happiness to me while reading it. An intent I hope that was well done.

Thanks for writing and sharing.
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Review of The Wedding Poem  Open in new Window.
Review by BostonFiction Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
A beautiful poem reflecting a time when happiness, family and friends come together.

The writer plants a vivid setting of the beach and surroundings. The reader is caught up in this poem very quickly and throughout the entire poem.

The flow was very well done and the entire poem reflected joy, love, love and coming together as a family.

Nice job on this.
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Review by BostonFiction Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
A beautiful poem of mother and son.

The way the writer created this poem speaks from the heart and soul. The images speak volumes to any reader who R&R's this poem.

A honest, heart felt writing by someone who adores the child with all her heart.
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Review of Just a story  Open in new Window.
Review by BostonFiction Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A very descriptive writing from a writer trying to better hherself in the english language.

I thought the over all story was nciely done. There are errors, but by the end of the atory the writer has come forth informing all readers with a honest and sincere jesture.

English is a difficult language, what works here, doesn't worh there, this word can be said this or that way. A complex sintax.

Overall, I enjoyed this little story about the writer and her two friends. Keep writing Star. It won't be to long before you are writing more and more.

A 4.5 for honesty and attempt.
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Review by BostonFiction Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
The writer shows the vast enviroment he enjoys in life.

The flow of the poem was very good and I especialy liked,
"I find the climes that inspire me best
The cold, the rain
The vast fields of ice
Locked inside a glacial realm
My soul captive of its device"

I thought this stood out best from the entire poem. Choice of wording was excellent and well thought out.

I enjoyed this poem.
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Review of Lovers  Open in new Window.
Review by BostonFiction Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An erotic poem filled with emotion, depth and raw passion.

The writer allows the reader to sense and see the passion and twist of fate between two lovers.

The ending was definately a twist of sorts where I felt awkward by the fast begining and fateful ending.

Loving too deeply sometimes makes two part is what I got from this poem.

Overall, nicely done and I did enjoy reading this.
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Review of Ageing  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
An honest and truthful poem about aging and the mental aspects that go along with it.

The writer allows the reader to sense the frustrations and the wondering what will happen in the future as we all age.

I liked how the poem flowed and all the truth within. I felt the writer was searching the soul, and finding there is still much to do.

I felt the writer wrote the heart and soul in this poem. I enjoyed reading this very much.
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Review of If Only  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A simple yet affective poem regarding the writers wished abd hopes.

The word love is surrounded by this poem. It is emotional, romantic and has a flow to it as well.

It captures the aspect of loving someone and absolute caring.

The writer displays the dreams and hopes for someone that the writer cares for.

Nicely done.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A poem with emotion and turmoil.

I liked how the writer allowed the reader to see the thoughts and emotion felt by the writer.

I thought the poem flowed well and the form was easy and nicely done.

The title was also well done. It clearly brought out the entire poem in one word.

Nicely done.
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Review of Whispers  Open in new Window.
Review by BostonFiction Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
A very wel written poen regarding whispers.

I found the poem flowed very well and the reader could sense the exact meaning of the title. I found I could see and sense as I read along.

I found no spelling errors or others. I enjoyed reading this poem a lot.

Nice job.
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Review of A Hollow Heart  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An interesting poem of death and the Grim Reeper.

I liked the overall poem and it's meaning. I thought the writer was able to catch any reader easily as it did me.

The flow of the poem was done well and at ties with rhyme. The form was nicely done as well.

Good job on this.
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Review of THE MAN IN RAGS  Open in new Window.
Review by BostonFiction Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
An interesting little story about ghosts and a girl's experience with them.

I found the writer was able to show and tell with the interaction with the ghost while shopping with her mother.

I liked how the writer also described her settings and the small details throughout the story.

I enjoyed this very much and think the writer is on her way. Keep up the good work.
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Review by BostonFiction Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
The writer came up with a good poll here. To us who love scary movies and like to be scared this was an easy poll to do.

The writer's title and well done selection of movies for the potential answers made it rather difficult to make a finall decision. I liked that I had to think back to which one did the most.

The number one answer was definately the one for me.

I enjoyed taking this poll and enjoyed seeing the end reults. Nice job on this...
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Review of The Closet  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
The writer was able to draw the reader in to this ghostly tale pretty easily. I liked how the writer described the surroundings and leading up to the end with a cliff hanger end. What happened?

I did see some grammar errors and fragmented sentences, but over all a review by the writer would fix those easily. I would have given a 4.5 for the entire plot and settinf.

I liked this story very much and want to know what happeens at the end. Nice job on this.
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Review by BostonFiction Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
An interesting chapter to what could be a very creative story.

The writer gives the story clear and descriptive characters leading up to a very unexpected end of the chapter.

The writer ability to draw the reader in ins done very well. Always making the reader want to know more.

I enjoyed this short chapter. Nice work.
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Review by BostonFiction Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
A beautiful tribute to five people the writer cared to share with the world.

The five people gave the writer the support,. love, guidence and helped shape this writer's thoughts, hopes, feelings and outcome in a time of pain and sufferign.

Any reader can feel the emotional turmoil, but also the love the writer has for the five people and the remaining family he has left.

The writer has alot of courage inside, any one can see that by reading this powerful story.

Thank you for sharing this and I truly hope the writer has gained much since writing this.

A powerful, emotioanl, truthful story of courage, loss and the ability to carry forward.

This is a five ***** star read.
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Review of Why I Care  Open in new Window.
Review by BostonFiction Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
A beautiful poem regarding friendship and the hardships that go along with them.

The writer allows the readers to see the pain and frustration one friend has n the other. The questions asked are honest, sincere and emotioanl.

The poem flowed very well and the reader is allowed to sense all the above while reading the authors thoughts.

Nice job on this.
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Review by BostonFiction Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
A dark, emotional poen regarding the inner feelings of a desperate person.

I found the poem to be very well written, packed with alot of emotion, searching for self and the deapth of someone truly writing within the heart and soul.

The poem flowed very well and the format was pleasntly vivid.

I enjoyed this poem and could feel the writer's energy.
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Review by BostonFiction Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting poll regarding writers on WDC and their geographical areas.

I thought this was a good jesture on the writers part to have others participate and see where everyone lives.

In addition, I thought the writers banner was a nice touch and ethicaly a tribute to all at WDC. The words couldn't be more true.

Nice job on this poll.
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Review of Check  Open in new Window.
Review by BostonFiction Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
A story of twists and money.

The writer shows a vivid and descriptive story where a man is traveling across several states.

The writer also shows the mentality of a man who is on the edge of losing everything if caught. The man doesn't seem too worried. A veteran of the run I guess.

The twist at the end completely shows how money means more to the man than what he was carrying.

A well set story that I enjoyed reading.
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