I like that the 3 line of every paragraph does not rhyme .
To many people think rhyming is the sole purpose of a poem .
It flows nicely .
It is easy to read .
It is easy to understand what you are saying .
I can feel your heart and your love for others .
I look forward to reading more from you !
Great job !
Well done !!
She didn’t know (T)hat this meant or why no one would admit they saw it, too.Misses a letter there.
It jumps from smooth reading to shock . As a horror that is great . I would like more detail about the fog or smoke before the scare. I understand this is a young girl and she wont give details about her surrounding, but a a writer i would like more. Over all if could give this a 10 I would!!!Good job good work
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