I was enthralled as soon as I read the blurb, eager to begin reading this story.
As an avid reader it is rare for me to be so captivated and intrigued by the description of the story and still find the content as interesting.
I really like your writing style, it's simple and easy to follow.
This first chapter is fantastic, I loved everything about it especially the creativeness and the description used, it made it very visual which is a great thing.
I simply can not wait to read the next chapter!