Powerful! The rhythm of the verse felt like waves, and the story it tells is as bewitching as sirens themselves! I could almost smell the sea air and feel the spray of the waves. It makes me want to know more--what happens next? Do the sailors heed the warning? Or fall under the spell of beauty. I loved the line "they want your life, not your money"!
Shivery good job, inkwell!
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