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Review of Haunting Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I have been through this (we all go through it at some point), so I know what you mean. And the words paint a vivid image.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
It's a lovely poem. I have spent the past week with my little nephew and I can back-up all the stanzas.

It's a good idea, presenting the world through the eyes of a baby. I have always believed that, the more viewpoints you get on something, the better you come to understand that thing.

Keep up the good work!
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Review of I Miss You  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is such a touching poem... It has really impressed me. Very well done! I have no words to describe the feeling it conveys.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a good poem. I like the ways you describe love, as if it's seen by many points of view, not just one. And it has a tinge of mathematics in it, which makes it even more appealing to me. Lovely similes... and the curing of hate by love is a wonderful manner of promoting it.

Keep up the good work!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Good simile. We're so often thrown away by life's incontrollable whims... But one must live... lest complaining be irrelevant. As Lord Tennyson put it: "'tis better to have loved and lost/than never to have loved at all."
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Review of A Sense of Hope  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
The message is really good. But you should pay more attention to the choice of words. I find the idea similar to some of my own poems, especially in the educational aspect. Keep up the good work!
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Review of The Woman's Spark  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Very nice poetry. It has lyricism and it renders a pleasant sense of intimacy. A hymn to women, in a delicate note. :)
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Very touching story. This one's rather hard to comment, cause it's more about the feeling it conveys than the words used to convey it.

It made me feel that Christmas spirit which is lost as we grow up. And the miracles that people bring about when at their best.
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Review of The Mirror  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I like the way you create images. They are quite strong and I could actually feel a shiver down my spine when reading about the woman's dress.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem was very touching. It somewhat reminded me of Depeche Mode's "Blasphemous Rumours". Very well done.
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