I feel that I have been in this situation at least once ,if not twice. This was very well written but I would have liked to have had more detail. I'm assuming you are talking about a relationship between you and someone you made a commitment to? This is really sad and yet could cause someone to stop and rethink their relationship and where it is going.
Wow. This story was one of those that once you started ,you could not stop reading. I think this was as good as any romance novel Ive read before and seemed very professionally done. If there were any mistakes ,I did not see them because i was too busy reading. Congratulations on a piece well done.