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Review of Annie May  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Nice ghosts helping the living! Always been a favorite of mine.

Keep up the good work,
Chazmando
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Unfortunately history tells us that it doesn't have to happen from disaster. The greedy are again pushing people to the starving point. I just hope this time people change the economic system so that all people share the bounties of the earth equally.

Just out of curiosity, how many demonstrations like "Occupy Wall Street" proceeded the French revolution and the beheading of those greedy people? I have no idea. Do you?
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Wow, ether you don't travel in the right circles or you don't give women the right vibe. Try looking up pet/puppy girl or master/slave on Google and see what articles you can find (I believe there are still some YouTube videos).

There are women interested in this in American society, many are just concerned that the men they do this with would mistreat them or judge them as bad women.

This is a will written and edited peace.

Keep up the good work,
Chazmando
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Review of Taboo Questions  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very interesting! I was born in 1958 so mu formative years were filled with things like the Kennedy assassination, the race riots of the '60s and racism!
I am a southern boy born and bread. My mother's mother is the only one of my grand parents that was born in a northern state and her father move his family to Florida when she was 4.

But my family is almost exclusively democrats. I was raised to believe that all people should be treated with a certain amount of respect.

This has helped me become more open and honest than many. I have been told (after talk in a group setting) that I am the most open and honest person that the speaker has ever meet.

Now days I can remember being sexually attracted to two different gay/transgender individuals during my life. I never acted on those fellings.

Now as a three time divorced person I sometimes ask my self, did I miss the love of my life because I don't act?

* note after 20+ reviews this is the first 5 star I have given.
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Review by chazmando Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Great story! Very much like a H.P.Lovecraft tail. The very last line of the P.S. seems to have too many "have" s in it. Otherwise the professional reading and editing seems to be spot on! Looking forward to reading more of your work.

Best wishes,
Charles
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Review of The Home  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Cool and a bit like a Lovecraft ghost story. I liked it. I did see a place , must have been as least 3/4 thru were there was a / where it should have been an I. Otherwise it seems perfect.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Great story! Just one question is subordination correct or should it be insubordination? Otherwise it's perfect ( in my opinion). Good luck in the contest!
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Review of The Fun House  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Not bad, not bad at all. Not knowing what's happening is the scariest part.
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Review of Red Tide  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Cool, I enjoyed this story. Keep up the good work.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great story! You have another fan that's for sure.
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Review of Hare Trigger  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Lol, jackalope...Roy Rogers! Awesome! I must read more!
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Review of Darkness Falls  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Interesting, I'm not big on poetry but I did enjoy reading this. Keep up the good work!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice short story. Why is the storyteller not living there?
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Review of Monty's Halloween  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Interesting! I would like to read more. Keep up the good work.
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Rated: 13+ | (2.5)
What happened to the camper from the first paragraph? Is this part of an unfinished story? I like the narrative and that it's told from the woman's point of view. Good start keep at it.
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