Thank you for sharing your story. I really enjoyed it. I seen one error in the beginning. You have
" Here, let me help you place it on the fridge." I think you mean in the fridge. Overall it is a nice holiday story.
I like this,it show some of the true thoughts and feelings that are in the mind of both men and women. Some of the things that hinder and hold us back, as well as some of the wants and fears.
It grabbed my attention and keep it because the wonder of what happened to grandma which I didn't find but then the new question keep me reading. What will they find when that box up Grandmas room.The sadness at the being switches to laughter showing that there can be a smile even when there is a loss.
This describes a feeling I have felt but couldn't put in words. I think you done a really good job at explain the emotion of emptiness but at the same time feeling every other emotion.
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