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Review of Torchlight  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
two spelling errors, masaquered, i think you mean massacred and carcess, as carcass. sorry just couldn't help myself.

Otherwise, a great read. Love the beginning of the story and how the story flowed. Elya Jaxin, would love to see more stories of this character.

Work a bit more of your descriptions too. I personally think some of words are not too suitable?

Cheers and keep it up. Enjoyed your work. :)
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
a very beautiful poem. the descriptions you used helped me to imagine the scenes portrayed. beautiful indeed :) keep it up!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
a newbie here, so nothing much i can say but, this is good :) i can imagine the scenes in what you wrote, just beautiful. keep it up :)
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