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Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Nice work! Remember to put the keywords in bold to qualify for the contest.
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Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Thoughtful words on the bleakness of the political situation…
You may need to check against the Sept requirements re: need for 4 syllables in the fourth line (in the first stanza) and need for 7 lines (you have 8 in the third stanza).
Have a great day!
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Review of Groceries  Open in new Window.
Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Too true! Nice sept.
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Review of Arlington  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Great poem about the Veterans’ cemetery…
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A nice thoughtful Christmas story about making it work out…nice job, a fun read.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Very creative short story. It was a pleasure to read about Sanjeev’s idea of giving Santa a new snack.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice job, sweet story. I know someone who eats pickle-peanut butter sandwiches…
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Review of A Box of Weeds  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Great work! I enjoyed your scene of an artist/musician/artisan living his life.
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Review of Shadow Moon  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Excellent story, as always. I like how she got a new name, Blue Jay’s Song, and how disappearing into the night is turned into a blessing instead of something terrible.
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Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice imagery of fresh air and rain, and family ties. Great poem. 🙂
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Beautiful and unique idea to have that pinch of stardust!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Fun idea! I would like to worship some spaghetti.
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Review of Solar Eclipse  Open in new Window.
Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very creative response to the contest prompt! I like how you had Alex reading, "Escape the Alien Ship," and it sets up a potential second chapter were the story to continue.
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Review of Gadzooks!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice word play! Keep up the good work.
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Review of The Caring Soul  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful story.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
“We will escape the trap
of the anthropoce“ - love that line.
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Review of Tingles  Open in new Window.
Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great, a very moving four lines.
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Review of Sibyl  Open in new Window.
Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
That’s awesome, and I’m inspired to read more about the African Sibyls.
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Review of Spring Day  Open in new Window.
Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
That’s a fascinating thought. 🙂
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Review of No More Fireworks  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice poem, and I agree about the safety and noise factor.
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Review of Story of a Cat  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice descriptive memento of your pet. I like the graphic design at the conclusion too. 🙂
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Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Neat clothes commentary and I agree with the critique. 🙂
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Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love the idea of being a citizen of the world and the way the poem gives it a visual connection. Nicely written.
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Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Nice work.
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Review by ChristineB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very thoughtful, nice work.
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