I really liked this. It was cute and deep at the same time. That was a cool element you included. I think it is unique how you used the semi-colon (this thing ; ) instead of the quotations for usual dialogue. I might not believe in a god, but I find stories like this one interesting. good job.
I really liked it. I'm not really good at reviewing poetry since I don't know all the technicalities that comes with writing it, but I enjoyed reading it. I especially liked the imagery you used about the abyss and explained how it played on hidden fears, that part gave me chills. Good job.
I really like this poem. I can really relate to the feelings of sadness/darkness in it. The image wasn't able to load, but I still enjoyed it. I wish I could see the image. I'm amazed at how people like you can write while keeping rhyme and meter in mind, but all the more talented you seem, good job.
I think it is good, I'm not very good reviewing poetry so I don't know a lot about freestyles, meter, or anything else with poetry but as a reader, I got the message that nature is a destructive force even without reading the little blurb thing under the title. So good job.
I really like this. Great ways of using the lines from other poems. If possible, I think it'd be nice if you could reuse the first line, but it's still good either way.
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