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Review by Chris M Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
What a cliffhanger!! Can't wait for the next chapter!

One question, if Truman's falling out of the building, which is hovering above the Earth, why is the building falling further and further away from him? Isn't he falling further and further away from it? Or is it just a matter of perspective?

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Review by Chris M Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Intriguing! I want to read more! Quirky, funny, mysterious! A good start to an interesting sounding story! But did you have to kill off the Sylph?? Poor thing! :) never mind, I suppose it's all part of the plot development.
Can't wait to read more of this, well done!!
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Review by Chris M Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Well I didn't expect that end! What a twist! Well written.
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