This explains a lot and tells so much in a good way. Your poem is also showing that it doesn't always have to rhyme and they they don't always rhyme. You also made it very clearly what you are talking about in this poem. Well done and great work.
I love the way you made it rhyme it is a really lovely poem I would love to see more of them that you have made. The way it rhymes its like it just flows along and it makes me feel like i'm floating. It really is unique and has a great meaning in it.
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