Aww! This is a wonderful poem. I believe any adult who reads this will sigh in both fond rememberance, and betrayal. The last line of "Wanting nothing," to me, perfectly portrays the bittersweet feelings of fleeting youth. Wonderful poem, thanks for sharing.
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