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Review by crafty_kbl
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really enjoyed reading this short story about your treacherous, and close calls of near death experiences. From nearly grazing a truck, to falling off a rail. Nonetheless, I had a lot of fun reading it and my attention was caught right from the start. =) Wonderful job incorporating the significant emotions that one would obtain while enduring such events. =) At one point I even held my breath as I envisioned such events going on. Great job on the flow, and resolution. I really liked how you ended your story of not wearing such heals again. I would definitely have to agree, heels and I do not mix. Great job!

Sincerely,
Katie
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Review of Bumble Boy  
Review by crafty_kbl
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
WOW! I really like the voice and the word choice that you put into this piece! great work. I was definitely able to picture it real well in my head. I like it when I am able to do that with stories. =) Good work capturing the reader's attention from the start.

Keep up the good work!

crafty_kbl
Katie

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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
WOW!!! I really enjoyed reading your story!! Great flow and perspective within it. Well done. I really like how you were able to incorporate the emotions of each character. Great job! thank you so much for writing this. I really appreciate your work!

Keep writing!

crafty_kbl
Katie
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