'sit' is said four times, it has vague language - sounds like a six year old or someone who doesn't speak English fluently wrote it. It seems like a crappy version of a proverb that goes on for four stanzas longer than it should do.
Good idea, however i think you tried too hard to appear smart, and failed.
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