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Review of Double Trouble  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
i like it
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Rated: E | (3.5)
nice
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Review of Boldness wins  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
good story
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
this is wroong
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
i think this is a good story and it has some good imagery. you should keep going with this story. well great job.
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Review of Nightly Routine  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
i think you finsh the a little to early and you need more detail but its good to me.
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Review of Final Exam  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
it was okay
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Review of Homework  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (1.0)
why is this important?
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Rated: E | (4.0)
i like it, good story
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
hey i think this story is good but its kinda to long and you could have made two stories and make it more fun then it is now and i hope to see a new one and its better then this one and more fun im not being mean i do like your story its just to long for me i think well thanks for taking the time to read this!
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Rated: ASR | (1.0)
write more
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Review of Rhyming Words  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (2.0)
write more
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Review of Why do you write?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (2.0)
please write more thanx
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Review of Writing in Snow  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
i like this it a lot but i think you should write more
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Review of A VIEW ON REVIEWS  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
hey i like this poem and i hope you write more like this and too keep up the good work and i would love to see more when i get back on just keep on the good work sir so im just telling you to do more because i would love to read more and habe a great day
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