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Review of I Was Good  Open in new Window.
Review by peacock22 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
That gave me chills!! There were so many great lines in here, like "the cold moved in the darkness"...beautiful imagery. But the best line is the last. That one sent chills up my spine. The story has a nice flow to it and is very visual. Fantastic job!
-Darlene :)
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Review of The Attic  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Wow! I was not expecting that! The little ghost girl broke my heart; I felt so sad for her. This is very well written and incredibly visual. You can practically smell the dust in the attic and feel her loneliness. Great job!! :)
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Review of Fear of the Dark  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
That was fantastic! It's like you wrote of my childhood. Sad thing is I'm still afraid of the dark. The story was well written, very visual and had a great flow to it. Great job!! :)
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Review by peacock22 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Very nice! I made the mistake of reading this at night and alone...gave me the creeps! Nice job. Very visual (which I LOVE) and well written.
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Review by peacock22 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
That was really interesting and eye-opening! Thanks for the link to the site.
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Review of First Anniversary  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
NIcely writtten. I could feel the emotion coming from the couple and the calm at the end. I enjoyed this. Good work.
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Review of Too Much Dope?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Very cool and creative.
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