Using the dreams to describe your protagonist whilst simultaneously setting the scene was an inventive choice. It does the necessary job of exposition whilst keeping interest.
Also loved the ending, I wasn't sure where the visions of his wife were going but bringing them in to tie up loose threads whilst also giving the story a twist of vengeance was gratifying.
Your style is similar to mine if a little more accomplished and I thoroughly enjoyed the story.
Would love to know your thoughts on some of my work.
Best.
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