Alright, so from what I see this short story was a little confusing with the liquids people tried giving our main character, however the ending was definitely…. Odd.
Honestly very interesting however me personally am not the smartest when it comes to poems and such, so I was a little confused but otherwise great read.
The best thing I ever read I’m not even going to lie this is absolutely amazing and keep up the great work however maybe put more emotion into the last parts.
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