I'm not really sure what to say about this, you have captured what many people feel, not just in America, but in the uk too.
I especially liked the last two verses the way the intesity and pace pick up delivering the message of what is happening with BOTH our govenments and then the last verse is almost like you have taken a long deep breath, coposed yourself and said "now this is how we fix it!
I didn't enjoy this as much as "once upon a merry go round" but you obviously have a talent for poetry. Like I said in a previous review, you have a talent for childrens poetry and I could imagine reading it to children and them enjoying it.
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