I absolutely enjoyed reading this piece. It was both original and well written and the idea of a dentist as a knight, shrinking into peoples mouths and attacking bacteria was very distinctive indeed. It shown a lot of thought and imagination, and would appeal to children from six years, to ten years of age.
I liked this piece and will gladly award it 5*.I will read more of your work.
I enjoyed this piece of work. It reminded me of the teen flick movies of the eighties. You know how to keep up the drama and are able to keep the story flowing. Okay it may not be the most original piece of work, but heck, look at the copying of previous books (Dan Brown etc).
But anyway, the story is good and the characters in the story interesting, and the atmosphere of the story chilling.
Overall a commendable piece of fiction, and encourage you to carry on writing.
cheers denbo356
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