Hello, To be honest I had no idea a flag is
folded thirteen times and each fold has a
value that a Nation could be proud of I learn
something every day thank you for sharing a part
of your Country's history, catch you on the morrow
Blessings
Day
Hello, Abuse so "Suffer The Little Children" most
times a man never realize his own strenght, when
he lets a flying fist go he does untold damage
children need poems like this to get the message
across to people who will report the Abuse so
that something can be done to help them, thank you
for sharing this poem.
Warm regards
Day
Hello, "Scotty's Last Lament" a tribute he would
be proud of, specially with his profound love for "Star Trek" did you know his Ashes will be carried into space then scattered out to mingle
forever with the star's, that will be his final frontier, thank you for sharing catch you on the
morrow
Blessings
Day
hello, I have read many poems since I have been
here, they come in all shapes and sizes a great
deal of written work is based on love, sorrow
and "teas of Pain" such as yours, took me ages to
my disgust, that I had been so shallow when I come across a poem with only eight lines,I can't wait to tell the author in a no nonsense manner what I
think, I have matured with reading and find you
can write everything you need to say in eight lines
keep writing and thank you for sharing
Warm Regards
Day
Hello, Though its been a year since you have
written this poem for the one you lost
I really hope "Now It's Clear" has given you
the strength to achieve what you set your
mind to, thank you for the read
Keep on writing.
Day
Hello, So sad when it comes to poems that try
and get it across to the readers how you feel
and what it does to the soul a nasty business
when terrorist carry bombs into a crowd of people
on trains, buses the destruction of life
the misery it causes, your poem tells of your
secret feelings I feel for you thank you for sharing
catch you on the morrow
warm regards
Day
Hello Revdbob, oooh so nice a poem and deserves
every star that I have given. this poem will
go far, if it is one day published, what am I
talking about your poem is published here on
W.com for everyone to see, one tiny point that
I want to share nothing to rave about but
caps at the beginning of each line sets it off
thanks for sharing catch you on the morrow
Day
Hello, Well Hotrock I found "Names Change" very
moving and you are so right, the turmoils that
was suffered by one and all was devastating, the
fear, the loss of life, you have captured the
horror in your poem I have rated you five stars
thank you for sharing this poem, keep on writing
catch you on the morrow
Arohanui
Day
Hello, "Wild Bill" Made his name in History
he had done many things in his life, I
bet he had no idea that someone like you
Finch would come along and write him in a poem
I think he would be tickled pink,since you
have written his life style for us to share
so thank you for the read, catch you on the morrow
Arohanui
Day
Hello, "The Past Holds The Memories" yes I couldn't agree with you more, some have fond memories
just as some would like to bury a memory that
has torn apart loved one's, its nice to read poems
like yours so thank you for sharing catch you
on the morrow
Arohanui
Day
Hello, "It's The Little Things,Lord"when poems like this one, gives you words for thought, bare in mind
when you have the lord on your side to guide you
A healing of a fragile soul comes naturally with
a full dose of love thank you for sharing
catch you on the morrow
Arohanui
Day
Hello Gina, "A Hard Lesson To Learn" so true
for our young girls who can't help openning
up the freshness of youth to display what beauty
any man can see and want the risk he takes
to taste the wild fruits thats forbidden to him
your poem thats been written on behalf of every
female goes along way thank you so much
for the read catch you on the morrow
Arohanui
Day
Hello True Blue, well done for the color puple
I to love the value of colors, what they have to offer
and what they represents it would be a very sad fact if we never had colors to enhance our vision or our wisdom, thank you for "Plenty of Purple" catch you on the morrow
Arohanui
Day
hello, "Grief Displaced" 9/11 that was a day from out of hell, we will all remember as each year passes.
People have their own unique way of mourning and healing a heart that has been serverley damaged by
the loss of a loved one who died by the hatred of man
he may not have a memorial to mark his rest you have
gone one better he is in a poem for all to pay
tribute to his memory thank you for the share catch
you on the morrow
Hello, its not always easy to cope with
a love beating from your heart for a male
who has fallen in love with another, the pain
he inflicted on you is an emotion old as time
itself love comes and goes as water under
a bridge "Inficted Pain" aaah it is best
channeled in the poem you have written where
love can no longer Inflict its pain thank you
for the share catch you on the morrow
Arohanui
Day
Hello Rogue your poem "Immortality"
is a fine tribute to all those Soldiers
who gave up there lives for the freedom
of our countries I have read many poems
here on writing.com so many Tributes to
the Armed forces it shows the strentgh
of how many people think about them while
they are in combat thank you for the share
catch you on the morrow
Arohanui
Day
Hello "The Oceans Mist" the waves have a soothing
effect on your senses with the salty breeze
that makes your stomuch growl in hunger I dont blame you for writing a poem its one of my favorite spots
as well thank you for the share catch you on the morrow
Arohanui
Day
hello our inspirations at most
times comes over us when you
least expect it a prime example,
of you sitting in church and
"Tribute to our Soldiers" came away
thank you for the share catch you
on the morrow
Arohanui
Day
hello, I think a stranger lurks
in us all their are times when
this stranger digs deep and
brings untold mischeif to the
surface, the unexpected of stanchness,
where he is the man, gods gift to
the unweary, most of all gods gift to
"The Stranger Within Me" you might
look back over the years and view that
stranger who came calling and stayed
thank you for sharing, catch you on
the morrow
Arohanui
Day
Hello what a lovely poem, you may
think your behind with your
English believe me you have developed
nicely to get your point across with
"Tide of Tears" well done and thank
you very much for the share catch you
on the morrow
Arohanui
Day
Hello "Eternal December" I was let
down with the feeling I didn't get the
message of what your poem was telling me
I get like that sometimes, where other
readers coming behind me gets an instant
insight thank you for sharing catch you
on the morrow
Arohanui
Day
Hello, Short brief and rough so you
said I didn't think it was to bad
on "Black Beauty" you explained
the reason of its power while racing
in the wind the challenge of the race
your poem beats him by a margin
thank you for the share cath you
on the morrow
Arohanui
Day
Hello, "Heaven Now Has A New Star" that
glows from all directions over the universe
and straight into your poem
it is sad when a man full of alcohol drives
his car and claims a life of a loved one
he will never be free of his action, maybe
time will one day feel sorry for him and
forgiveness will come from your uncle
and family thank you for sharing catch you
on the morrow
Arohanui
Day
hello, what a lovely poem you
have written, the natives of old
in my country would know of the
"Wind Spirit" that you speak of
you have caught the haunting
essences and dared to share it
with us thank you so much for
sharing this beautiful poem with
me catch you on the morrow
Arohanui
Day
Hello, "Bloodlust" why is it we humans
have a thirst for someone elses blood,
to take a life, your poem tells of its
lust, makes one shudder when the victim
sees the flash of the blade before he
plunges it into the soft flesh then watch
it ooze, thanks for the share catch you
on the morrow
Arohanui
Day
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