Gina, ok I did laugh at your, shall we say
misadventure I would have got Dixie by the ears
and gave it a through twisting, my patients would
have stretched to its limit and oooh boy I would have been inside looking out, ooooh my goodness,lol the Locksmiths, I would have wop him I had no idea it was so exspensive to cut a key here costs $8 for two
but!! thats what friends are all about, I'm pleased you are all safe thanks for the read loved it
Arohanui Day
Hello Jale, amazing isnt it when death pushes
ahead of time, "Final Journey" explains alot to the readers who comes to visit your port, I can imagine how
much you felt writing this poem, it has its moments of telling stress, to explain how and when the razor was
going to be put to use, aaah Jale, thank you for sharing catch you on the morrow
Cheers Day
Hello ferris, like you I would like written feed back
rather than have the bare rating, sometimes its very differcult to r/r a written piece,but I find having an honest opinion can get you out of a tight corner, it may not be praise of what the writer wants,but! add
least it is some constructive criticism take your
poem "Honor and Justic" took me a couple of reads
before the penny dropped, to realize the poem was
based on the sword, because of that Ferris the poem
showed more valour, and this is where I take my leave
thank you for sharing, catch you on the morrow
cheers Day
hello, I notice the poem "REPRISAL" was written in
2001 yet! still the message is strong, reading it today
in 2003 it never lost its volume I like a poem that can carry its own weight through the years and still deliver its meaning I have given you full marks of
what you both deserve, catch you on the morrow
regards Day
"The Three Strings" you lost the plot on the last
verse, apart from that it has alot of amusing
woes for the Strings to try and get to the Bar
thank you for sharing I liked it alot,
SNAP!!BUSTED..I'm still messing around in your
dungeon lol when you e-mailed back in
yes I did like your poems bit short but acceptable
cheers Day
"Two Gardens" again a well written poem
I would like to see a couple of verses
added on, however you gave it as we see
it, thank you for sharing,I also liked
"Different Folks", thats another review
catch you on the morrow
cheers Day
Well Misawa, you have wonderful poetry
I have read several so I an going to rate
them highly, your flow of words are excellent
if you see any footprints they are mine
magic dust for your poems
bless you Day
Hello Misawa, this poems well written
it has a mind, it has a body most
important it has a soul, how
"Our Love and War" tangles together
and comes out whole is beyon me
but it does, thank you for sharing
and I will catch you on the morrow
Bless you
Day
Hello Pam,"Old Glory Flies" countrymom
has brought out some astonishing poems
In her contest "Veteran's Day" your
poems well written thank you for sharing
cheers Day
"War is over" You wrote this poem 2001
I'm sitting here pondering,how do I R/R
this poem,do I slap a number on it and
with tongue in cheek exit out,I wish
it was that simple,so here I am sitting
looking at your POEM...ok honest opinion
your poem hurts,room for improvement,read
other poems to help you on your way,my
doors open if you need help,I must point
out I am an amature poet,also willing to
learn,catch you on the morrow
Cheers Day
Hello K, we have a very complex mind
a universal of power, distance, man has
over come there are many ways we can
cover the distance, even by thought
(Intro)"To Distance" is to travel in
time so I can catch you on the morrow
cheers Day
Hello countrymom,"The Measure Of A Man" I hope I'm
as lucky as you, and not bite off more than I can
chew, perhaps I have to sample a few before I get
his full Measure,hehee catch you on the morrow
cheers Day
Way to go Hippo,you sound like a real
happy-go-lucky Lady,cheers to you.
Though you wrote "My Fun"in 2002
I plummeted around in your poem at
breakneck speed loving the adrenalin
rush,if your anywhere down by my port
drop by and I'll take you for a spin.
cheers Day
Hello Morgan,born a Jew during WWll
was the bitter end to their distruction
a holocaust we cant tuck away in our
memories and think it never happened
millions of lives,"Why" portaits the
question thats been ask over the
last sixty years,when you find the
true reason, I have a free ear...
catch you on the morrow
regards Day
oooh Gina,a beautiful poem
so sad and telling,
for a special little guy
name of "Caleb" its wonderful
that love can make you see
these things and able to share
with us all in your Poetry
thank you so much
Kia Kaha Day
Gina what a lovely poem,here in NZ we use to have a
"Dolphin" Opie he use to guide the boats in and play with the children,sadly he was shot by simple minded
persons who didnt know any better he is part of our History,now we have a place in the South Island where
people swim with the "Whales" and a home in your poems
where Dolphins are safe love your poem
cheers Day
Hello Gina,"Your Eyes"Says your up and running to be a writer/poet for people to relate to,what you have written happens to alot of us in this cruel world of ours past,present ,future its all their pack in your poem keep writing Gina and I will keep reading
thank you so much for sharing
Arohanui Day
Hi Scott,"The Tail" of O'Rocky
Hasnt met my "Jaws yet, He flexs
his claws and whoosh his tail
and hides behind me when it
comes to a fight,I'm sending him to
a Karate school,coz hes a scary pants
and he's partial to Russian Blue
he also loved the poem and said
hey with a purr thanks for sharing
cheers Day
Hello Scott,phew what a lovely poem
well written even with the help of
38 Titles from the movies,I must admit
I entered a contest about the Bee Gees
and I used all the songs they sung,yeah
I won hey if I dont blow my own trumpet
no one else will,lol thanks for sharing well
done cheers Day
Hello,"Early Morning"one of my favorite
time of the day,the crisp air,wow its stunning
and the promise of the suns rays, you Inhale
the beauty of life,loved your poem
keep that pen flowing
cheers Day
Hello Harry,Sad isnt it when the
womans stoned to death for her
discretions,worse when a baby
mother dies for nothing but for
dignity on the said x-mate
and family why do they get
the impression they are the
injured party,when shes the
one stoned to death,thanks for
sharing
Regards Day
Hello,"Woman on the Corner"brought out the sorrow
in you,through your poem it did me too,In my country
you would never see such a woman,if you did it would
be a very rare sight so thank you for reminding me
that my smug little world not full of roses I would like very much to stay a while in your port if you dont mind...thank you so much
With Respect Day
HAHA Hello Harry would I like to
be a fly 0n the wall,when you buy
the stuff for $49.99 for your wife
lol just joking,liked your poem
thanks for sharing
cheers Day
Gosh,"The First Stone"I find myself choosing
my words very carefully,where this poem is
concerned,dont ask me why,in many ways I am
Innocent,yet my mind can go wayward as the next
one.which doesnt mean to say I speak with the
wisdom of my tongue,but with friends like you &
jennywren,plus to many to mention. To guide me
and keep me on the level I'm grateful,
Blessings Day
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