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Review of Stay  Open in new Window.
Review by Alisea Ovrebo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
terrificoque! terrificoque! This was beautiful and but hinted with laces of sorrow. I think we all reach a peak in life where we start to wonder where God is and start to doubt out faith. I have not to long ago doubted myself but then I found it once again in a recent turn of events :) You have a gift to write a piece that connects deeply. Bravo.
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Review of The Sound  Open in new Window.
Review by Alisea Ovrebo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Amazing :) All I have to say is wonderful! I liked this story so much I bookmarked it so I could read it anytime~ Hehe. Your grammar was spot on and your approach had hit the mark. I will be absolutely read this on the plane back to Norway :) Terrific job Tom A+
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Review by Alisea Ovrebo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
O.O OH MAH GAWD!! That was one heck of a story! I wish there was another Chapter! Seeing L.B and the girls in the room was tense! I also like how Christina was a medium and the thing about the Gods =D The ending though, now that my friend, was suspenseful! I tell you this, it did keep me on the edge of my seat =D And I'm on the floor, so that tells you everything =D
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Review of Veniam: Chapter 3  Open in new Window.
Review by Alisea Ovrebo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Cool!! I like how everything is falling into place! And love the name 'Daniil' it is awesome =D Well technically I love all the names on here XD I can't wait to read the next part!! I really like though, it is defiantly original and has a flare to it =)
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Review of Earth: Lost  Open in new Window.
Review by Alisea Ovrebo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I like the time skips! Even though it was constantly skipping you didn't overwork anything! It might have been a constant time skip but that didn't pull me away or make me say "Stop skipping!!" Actually, it was very interesting, and brought to you by the characters too =) I love it!! And the ending, the ending was very genius! Good job!
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Review by Alisea Ovrebo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Awwww this was so breath taking and a bit sad! I love you depth in the story! It is, how you say, enlightening! I really love how you blended all of the sorrowful and tragedy into one but came out as a beautiful sad joy in the end =) It is a rare occasion I see that =D Good work and keep writing! A++!!!
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Review of Veniam: Chapter 2  Open in new Window.
Review by Alisea Ovrebo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Ohhhhh things are coming to par!! I like where this is going!! Are you making another Chapter? I would love to read the next one when it comes out!! Do please let me know when it comes out, I love how things are going and I also love Luca's full name! It's very creative and beautiful =D
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Review of Veniam: Chapter 1  Open in new Window.
Review by Alisea Ovrebo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Whoaaaaaaa! An obsession you say? Oh Luca >:D Hohohohoho!!! Things are getting very interesting!! My favorite line was "It was beyond love, it was beyond attraction, it was pure obsession." That got me on the edge >:D And whiny mom? yup, sounds like my grandma/nana XD Love the worry wart =D
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Review of Veniam: Prologue  Open in new Window.
Review by Alisea Ovrebo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love the fiery corpse scene! How you described the hollow sockets and teeth scene =D I'm going to go to the next Chapter because I really want to see who is this voice! The prologue indeed draw me in =) Now I shall read the next one! It shall be very exciting! :D
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Review of Some Thoughts...  Open in new Window.
Review by Alisea Ovrebo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Awwww this is so wise Christie!!! I never saw you write a Easter flick before, well kind of Easter-ish :D Hehehehe nice Good job!
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Review by Alisea Ovrebo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oooooh!!! I like this one!! It all rhymes!!! but makes sense at the same time!! *gasps* hey! that rhymed too! :D You did really awesome!! It's not to often that I see when things rhyme but makes sense all in one :D
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Review of Basically Me  Open in new Window.
Review by Alisea Ovrebo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I can't remember if I read this one but if I didn't then I would like to say that you did a very very great job!! It's such a lovely thing =D Great job!
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Review by Alisea Ovrebo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very interesting concept to your story =D It is truly lovely to see such interesting point of views when reading lovely stories like these :D I think you did very well! And I hope you get 5 stars since this was such a great story ;) Truly a job well done :D
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Review of "To Dad "  Open in new Window.
Review by Alisea Ovrebo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is such a wonderful tribute it left me teary I at the end TT_TT You have such a wonderful gift for writing that it is truly inspiring! Well done. Well done.
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Review by Alisea Ovrebo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Ohhhh!!!!! huge cliffhanger!!! I really wish this was much much longer!! You did very well though =) But I just wish it was longer =D
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Review by Alisea Ovrebo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
You know this was a great story! The idea is very interesting =D My favorite part was "Ralph is gone. He died to save me. I have crossed a line I never wanted to cross. Is it really going to be worth it in the end?" Sad, but lovely :) Is there more to this?
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Review by Alisea Ovrebo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Awwww I read this item to my little sister =D she loved it!!! I also want to say that you did great job :) It's nice to read a wholesome children's story :D
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Review by Alisea Ovrebo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
First off, 'Keynan' such a cool name =D
Second off, this deserves more stars!!
and third, I love this story because it almost reminds me of a game called 'Singularity' =D so awesome it was!

but pass that this story is awesome!

P.S. my favorite line was "When he turned over the eight of diamonds that he had drawn, he ran his tongue across the inside of his upper lip to hide the smile that wanted to appear, forgetting for the moment , flying, missions, war and even the letter from Klara in the top pocket of his flight suit. He was about to win the pot of the evening."

poker face =D


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Review by Alisea Ovrebo Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
great story! I really should of been reading this when I stayed in the hospital =D This would have made my day a lot easier XD but good job though! You my friend serve a smiley and a A++ for all of you great rhyming skills and hard work =D great job!


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Review by Alisea Ovrebo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
You know I really don't read 'medical' stories but this one was soooo touching! I think adding the sweet card bit at the end really made my day =D I am now a fan to this adorable story! Also favorite line:It was not just cancer he needed recovery from. Rather the years of negativeness that had seeped into his life like a cancer.

just perfect :D



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Review of The Inevitable  Open in new Window.
Review by Alisea Ovrebo Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This poem was very soft and sad, but it was so bright in the end =) I think you did very well! You do have a strong passion for writing, and let it live on :)




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Review of A WIFE'S DREAM  Open in new Window.
Review by Alisea Ovrebo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
W-Why in the world is it so short? I was just getting into it until it stopped D: Niuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review by Alisea Ovrebo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like you! It's really great to see another Christian who is expressive! I do say that things has become real tough now in these days, but we all have to stick together! As it says in revelations that the lord shall be coming soon and we all must be ready! Things will be looking up =)
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Review of The Father  Open in new Window.
Review by Alisea Ovrebo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
srmgkergnjewngie!!!!!!!!!! Got damn it! this is the second most depressing story I read today!!! And when having cramps it doesn't make it better! -mumbles about crying in a bucket- just perfect, another tear jerker TT_TT
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Review of Demon's Seed  Open in new Window.
Review by Alisea Ovrebo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I am very pleased by this fine piece of work that was put out! Indeed it was thrilling!!! I find it very awesome to find a person who also writes about a devil =D I too am writing about a devil! only he's five! but pass that I think this story was very thrilling and it suited my interest and captivated me =) I give you A++!!
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